New Story, Preview
A new story I'm working on.
Hey, guys. I'm still writing changing Shakespeare but I'm going to start a new story. Here is an extract from it.
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I was nervous, really nervous. But hey, you would be too if you were starting a new school in the middle of a semester. And if you've never been to school before. Well, I've been to school but it was different. Really different. I strolled hesitantly into the classroom. A brunette, brown eyed, fair-skinned lady in her mid-thirties greeted me. I assumed she was the teacher. "Hi," she said, "I'm Mrs. Bradley. You must be Matt."
"Uh yea," I answered, shaking her hand.
"Class, this is the new student, Matt Lane." The teacher said, unenthusiastically.
"Uh, hi" I said shyly, turning around to face the class. Then more confidently I ran my hand through my hair. I knew I was attractive. All the girls swooned...but one... I smiled at each girl, and all of them smiled back...all but one...
"Nice disguise, Samuel Blake Pederson." That one girl said, she was smirking. I gasped. Only one person knew my full and entire name... I was staring face to face at Bonny Keldman. Today, her shoulder length light brown hair was tied in a bun. Her hands rested on her waist. Her blue eyes stared icily into to mine. God, she was beautiful. If only she didn't hate me so much.
She whipped out a phone and I knew who she was going to call, but I couldn't let her. I just couldn't go back to what I tried so hard escaping from.
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Give me ideas on how I should start the story. help me decide what it is about. Help me on the title. please comment!
Love you guys lots,
Brittani
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I was nervous, really nervous. But hey, you would be too if you were starting a new school in the middle of a semester. And if you've never been to school before. Well, I've been to school but it was different. Really different. I strolled hesitantly into the classroom. A brunette, brown eyed, fair-skinned lady in her mid-thirties greeted me. I assumed she was the teacher. "Hi," she said, "I'm Mrs. Bradley. You must be Matt."
"Uh yea," I answered, shaking her hand.
"Class, this is the new student, Matt Lane." The teacher said, unenthusiastically.
"Uh, hi" I said shyly, turning around to face the class. Then more confidently I ran my hand through my hair. I knew I was attractive. All the girls swooned...but one... I smiled at each girl, and all of them smiled back...all but one...
"Nice disguise, Samuel Blake Pederson." That one girl said, she was smirking. I gasped. Only one person knew my full and entire name... I was staring face to face at Bonny Keldman. Today, her shoulder length light brown hair was tied in a bun. Her hands rested on her waist. Her blue eyes stared icily into to mine. God, she was beautiful. If only she didn't hate me so much.
She whipped out a phone and I knew who she was going to call, but I couldn't let her. I just couldn't go back to what I tried so hard escaping from.
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Give me ideas on how I should start the story. help me decide what it is about. Help me on the title. please comment!
Love you guys lots,
Brittani
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