New Story Idea!! Please Read!!

For once I decided to write a book in mostly a boy's point of view.. don't know how it will go. PLEASE READ!
I walked down the hallway, surrounded by my guys. I headed to the lunch room and got a lunch, and then went outside to the courtyard to eat.

I was a nice sunny day, with the breeze just right, blowing on my dark brown hair. It was the last day of school, and I couldn’t wait. College. I had a scholarship for football. On that happy note, I walked over to my girlfriend.

"Hey, Melonie. I’m sorry, but, for the summer, I think we should break up. I really am sorry." I watched her excited expression turn into a depressed one. I bit my lip as a single tear rolled down her face.

"No. That’s ok. I understand." She nodded and wiped her tear. I smiled.

"Thanks. I walked away. Was a player? No.. I haven’t had very many girlfriends but, I needed something new for the summer, something better. Melonie was starting to get boring anyway.

The bell rang and I walked back down to the hallway back to my locker. Millions of girls walked past, but one caught my eye. The girl was obviously not popular. She had on a black, baggy hoodie, with the wrists cut. She had blond, emo styled hair, and something look wrong. She looked sad, almost.. jumpy. But she was beautiful.

This will be a sad book. Just Saying. But Please Read anyway. It will most likely be called Life Or Death.
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Published: 4/21/2011
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