Mystery Girl: Prologue

Britney meets a girl who turns out to be more than she thinks... Please comment, it's my first story so let me know if there are any probs ... :)
"Mom, I'm going to the park with Briana!" I shouted as I left the house. In case you don't know, my name is Britney Hewitts and I'm in high school. Being the most popular girl in school, you can guess it's easy and natural for me to make friends.

Talking about friends, my best friend is Briana Adams. She's tall, good natured and kind, with light brown hair and matching eyes unlike me. I'm also tall, but my eyes are blue with blonde hair, two colors that simply do not go together.

As I left the house, I thought about how much I love my family and friends. As I reached Briana's house, I was greeted by a shout of "Hey Britz!" by Briana.

"Hey Bree!" I greeted her back.
"So you comin' to the park?" I asked her.
"You bet! " she said.

After fifteen minutes, we were sitting on a bench with Bree drinking some Coke and chatting. After a while, I saw a girl sitting on a bench far off.

"Hey Bree, that girl looks sad," I said.

"So what do you wanna do bout' it?" Bree asked me teasingly, knowing what I would say.

"Make friends, of course!" I told her.

"I have a feeling she's not what she looks like..." I heard Bree say as I walked towards the girl.
Should I continue?
Yes.
Whatever.
No.
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Published: 9/7/2011
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