My Walk With Death

My fiance wrote this poem before we met....If you think this is good please comment. He doesn't think he's a good writer :D
As time goes on tick by tick
There are so many things making me sick
From friends to family even ex's too
Troubling decisions and yet nothing to do
Say
See
Or hear
Am I over reacting
Or is this something to fear
Day by day draws Death's disaster
Night by night I wish it'd come faster

One heart
One life
May come to a stop
Just waiting for the right tick
On that old damn clock
No I will not harm myself
About it I do not think
For the last grain of sand
My time will clink
To the bottom of this hour glass

I'll take Death's hand
And side by side
We'll leave this land
Hoping not to leave anyone
Hurt in my wake
Wanting and hoping
It was the right decision to make
This is goodbye
So don't shed a tear
Only smile

For there is nothing to fear
Though I may be dead
I am never gone
For in the living's hearts
I will forever live on
I will die for the rights I have
Protected through fight
In battle I shall die
The battle of the night
Ideas are bullet proof
So they say

My ideas will live on
They can't be taken away
Remember to smile
No crying tears
Death is an adventure
And nothing to fear
Know that I love you
I really do
Forever I will wait
At the end of Death's ride for you
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Published: 5/3/2010
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