My Sin

All of my poems are about death, suicide, love, vampires… I'd b so thankful if the people who read my poems left a comment about them… so that I could have an idea if my work is good enough... thx
No one else is around
I scream from the wicked sting
I don't want to think about her anymore
But she is my everything

I can't allow myself to breathe
And so my lungs are caving in
Because I can't take in the air
For it's poisoned with my sin

You kiss me bitter sweetly
But I taste approaching death
You offered your life so I took it
As I inhaled your last breath

By André Ribeiro
Published: 12/25/2006 		Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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