My River Of Love

Short poem about my feelings for a special person ♥
Love is as water,
Much desired to those who have it not.
Fragile and ever changing as it's ripples,

Yet constant as the stars.
Refreshing as the cool crisp air,
Yet raging as an ocean storm.

Like a rumor, is it true, or is it not?
Like a story, perceived different to every reader.
It makes you laugh, cry, lash, sigh.

Like the mind, so simple yet so complicated.
Let your love always be with me,
Let it never depart.

No matter how much it varies,
You, my dear will always be my love.

By Amelia Mayr
Published: 10/16/2009
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Opinions? Please comment :)
Amatuer, it has no flow
It doesn't rhyme well
It seems choppy and uneven
It's ok but it could be better
It's awesome!
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