My Perfect Life - 4 - My Kidnappers

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Chapter 4: My Kidnappers

"She's sleeping!" I heard a voice mumble, my eyes fluttered open and I found myself in a bed wearing a pajama?

I observed my surroundings and saw Joe and another guy standing looking at me with their eyes wide open.

"What are you looking at?" I removed the blanket, and I saw the room clearly. It was a boys room, clothes on the floor, shoes scattered everywhere papers all around. WHAT A MESS!

"Where am I?" I asked getting out of bed, I checked out the guy that was standing beside Joe.

DAAAAMMNNN!!! Brown hair, green eyes wearing a tight shirt that showed all the hidden abs!

"Hi" he drew a smile on his face, which made my heart leap in happiness! But wait Ashley, he's older than you and besides he's your kidnapper!

"Who are you?" I crossed my arms "How did you get me into those pajamas?"

Joe chuckled "This is Zack, 25 years old... as you can see muscular. Don't worry Ash, a woman did"

"Why didn't he talk?" I passed by them and Zack chuckled "Listen girlie, we don't need trouble here so just obey us and be a nice little girl alright?"

"NO!" I snapped "YOU FUCKING KIDNAPPED ME! YOU FUCKING TOOK ME AWAY FROM MY PARENTS! HOW THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO KNOW IF YOU DIDN'T RAPE ME WHILE I WAS SLEEPING?! I WANT TO GO BACK! TELL ME WHY DID YOU TAKE ME! WHY ME?!"

I took a deep breath and lowered my face; I hope they don't hurt me.

"We can't tell you..." Joe pushed me aside and rushed downstairs leaving me with Zack.

"Ashley, we're not going to hurt you... it's the other way round -." I interrupted "What do you mean?"

"Just- stay calm and don't run away, coz if you did... you're not going to be treated the same" He walked away leaving me in the room "You can come down and meet the others".

Others? I scoffed and rushed behind him. The house I was in was quite big, 4 or 5 bedrooms... even the living room is huge!

Then I noticed about 5 boys sitting in the living room, some smoking and some eating. What is this?

"Guys, guess who woke up?" Zack said out loud making all the boys turn their heads towards me.

"Good morning Ashley" they all said Simultaneously! I scanned the whole room and took a good look at the guys. They are all HOT! If only Melina was with me!

"Okay, okay what's going on here?" I asked pointing at them and then crossing my hands and looking back at Zack.

"This is Matt" he pointed at a guy with brown hair, brown dark eyes. Cute face, abs why are they all so Charming Damn it! "He's the same age as mine, a master in the martial arts and can kick butts!"

He pointed at a boy who was smoking, before Zack could even say anything I walked over to him and slapped his hand causing the cigarette to fall, I heard them all chuckle but he looked at me with an eyebrow raised.

"If you want me here you better not smoke!" I looked at the other guy who was holding a cigarette and I pointed my finger at him.

"Don't make me come".

He raised his hands in surrender and threw it away. "Good Boy" I walked back to Zack "Continue".

They all burst out laughing!

Zack continued "The guy you just hit is Josh, he's 23 and masters the usage of daggers" Josh had tanned skin, hazel eyes muscular body. He pulled out a dagger and kissed it then winked.

I looked at him confused and poked my tongue at him! They all burst out laughing again. Boys!

"This is Alexander, he's 22 and an expert with electronics..." Alexander was the cutest but the skinniest, he didn't look like a 22 year old person!

"And last but not least" Zack pointed at the guy who was smoking but surrendered "Elliot... 20 years old and he's the observer, and an expert with guns as well... he'll be keeping an eye on you the most"

I checked out Elliot, he waved and flashed a sexy smile... I smiled back then my eyes met Joe.

"And I am Joe, 18 and the fastest, the quickest, the strongest and the hottest" he took a bite of his apple and stood right in front of me.

"Wait, wait!!" Alex yelled "Who the hell said you're the hottest?!"
"Yeah!" they all agreed, Joe looked at me and then at them "Can't you see the steam rising out of me" he sarcastically smiled and messed with my hair "Who's the hottest?" he asked me.
I smiled "I can't choose, but you're not one of them" I pushed him away.

"OHHH!!" They all said and I giggled. Joe pouted "What's wrong Mr. Hotty?"

"I'm offended" he placed a hand on his heart and pretended to be hurt.

"Like I care" I took his apple away and took a bite "Go get yourself another one"

The boys were chuckling and Joe just looked at me and stumbled to the kitchen "I DON'T LIKE YOU ASHLEY!" He yelled.

"oh trust me, me neither" I mumbled as I sat down.

"Where's my Joshyyyy?" I heard a girls voice! A girl! I turned around and saw a girl apparently, with long black hair, blue eyes a beautiful smile.

"Oooh Joshyy" Elliot made fun of him, and started making smooch faces. I giggled as Josh stood up "Yes Baby".
She jumped on him and gave him a huge hug! "I missed you my little angle!"

"I missed you too Skye" he said and they pulled away.
She looked at me and gasped "Who's that little pretty girl right here?"

She came to me "I'm Skye, what's your name?"

"Ashley" I smiled. And she ran back to her 'Joshy'.

He sat down and she sat on his lap, they started flirting and making out. They looked like the perfect couple.

I sighed and looked at the TV, Joe sat beside me "Done with my apple?" he glared.

I laughed "Yeah..." what am I doing here?

I want to go back to my friends, I don't want to trust anyone here. Ugh! Why can't I just go back!?

I stood up and looked around me, the boys were fooling around. Skye was busy with Josh, Joe was watching TV. Why won't anybody tell me what's happening? Why won't anybody at least give me a hint? What happened to the old life I had, will it return or will I stay trapped in here forever.

"What do you want from me?" I mumbled.

"What?" Joe said over the noise.

"WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?!" I yelled out loud causing silence to take over.

"JUST TELL ME!" I screamed.

I closed my eyes, and tears started escaping "Why am I here?!"
They were still looking at me but not answering! "ANSWER!"

"Ashley, you should get some sleep you're tired" Zack came over and touched my shoulder "DON'T TOUCH ME!" I moved away and they all came to view.

"SCREW YOU!" I yelled and ran towards the door, I opened it without looking back and I rushed outside when suddenly I bumped into someone HUGE!

I stumbled and fell back, I tilted my face up to meet a man. He looked in his late forties pretty old but well built body.

His eyes were piercing, I can feel him examining me. I stood up and tilted my head up then he smiled "Ashley..."

Oh, wow everybody knows my name. How cool is that -.-

He suddenly hugged me what a pedo!? "HEY!" I pulled away, he grabbed my arm and placed me back inside.

"Who the hell are you?!" I yelled looking at him as the boys stood beside him.

He stared at me and said "My name is Jack Black, and I am your father".
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