My Brother

How someone else can suffer too?
The sun through your eyes,
the rays through your skin,
the heat is burning your conscious,
can't think anymore, can't even breath,
no longer can you hear your heartbeat,
the frustration is killing you,
exposed and tired with every breath you take,
your suffering now from your heavy state,
of health is what you suffer from,
that's what I say,
not from the heart, not from the soul,
cause you're not surrounded by people,
take care, theirs humans that love you,
I hope you know that and won't forget,
cause my brother I love you.
What did you think about this poem?
it was great
it was good
it was ok!
not what I expected
not sure I understood
it sucks!!
you should stop writing poems, really just stop.
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