My Brother

How someone else can suffer too?
The sun through your eyes,
the rays through your skin,
the heat is burning your conscious,
cant think anymore, cant even breath,
no longer can you hear your heart beat,
the frustration is killing you,
exposed and tired with every breath you take,
your suffering now from your heavy state,
of health is what you suffer from,
that’s what I say,
not from the heart, not from the soul,
cause your not surrounded by people,
take care, theirs humans that love you,
I hope you know that and won’t forget,
cause my brother I love you.

By maggie gutierrez
Published: 1/12/2008

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