Mutant's Story (Draft Two)

Kaylin was walking home from Grammie's house when a darkly handsome vampire stops her.
It seemed like a century before I could pry my eyes away.
His dark eyes, that knew too much, entranced me. I felt exposed. I turned and took two steps before I fell. Stupid, stupid, stupid! I thought. A quick tug of my hand and I was standing closer to him. My hands instinctively went to his chest.
"Thanks" I mumbled.
"Why are you not frightened of me?" he asked with a curious look.
"Should I be?"
"Most would" he replied. Then I noticed he hadn't breathed at all.
"You're a..." I started. Fangs popped out.
   By Sasha Pabon
Published: 11/24/2008
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