Murderific

I know it has a gay title but I like it so if you would please read it and leave a comment… I would really appreciate it...it's a different style from what I’m used to writing…so please read it....thanks
We live in a wonderful place
Where blood lingers on the floor
People cover up their face
Human parts left at the door

Murder is the number one game
Winners win their part
Living brings people to shame
And glad with rip out heart

Holding knife with wrath
Leave no trace behind
Only blood marks in a path
No bodies left to find

Many people are real mean
They kill for no reason
They take out your spleen
But it's just for the season

Bodies wander on the ground
Lifeless as the death
Making no sound
Not breathing a breath.

By Karen Sanchez
Published: 6/22/2007		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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