Mortal Love

All of my poems are about death, suicide, love, vampires... I'd b so thankful if the people who read my poems left a comment about them... so that I could have an idea if my work is good enough... thx
The silver years we'll never lose
Fell out of our hands and flew away
We reach out to feel them one last time
And we ran amongst mirrors of yesterday

The seas we flew in past lives
Have now been dry for days
We forgot to send letters once again
To moon beams in sunrays

Lost inside the clouds in a black sky
Upon mountains of rain
I saw the dreams we once had
Running away again
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