More of the Paradummy

Angel wants a paradummy badly, but after she gets one, she regrets it.
Chapter 4

The Paradummy store was just like wow. There was like a million paradummies all around you. The Paradummy store keeper was cool. He had a paradummy shirt, a ring, and paradummy pants.

"Can I help you little girl?" the store keeper said.

"I’m not a little girl." I mumbled.

"What?"

"Oh yes please." I said.

"Ok. What is the problem with your paradummy?" he asked.

"Well you won’t believe me." I said.

"I will believe everything you say." He said.

I really did believe him so I told him.

"Well," I said, "I think one of my paradummies is alive."

"Hmmmmmmm." He said.

"Let me see your paradummy."

I put Shasa on the table.

"Whoa!" he said.

"I’ve never seen this type of paradummy before. Where did you find ‘er?

"On the road." I said honestly.

"Well I’ve never seen this type of paradummy before."

For a whole 15 seconds, we didn’t say anything.

"Well do you believe me?" I said.

"Yes." He said.

"I do."

"Well can you fix her?" I said quickly.

"Yes. I can. That will be $15.00."

I was happy I brung a $20.00 bill with me. I gave him the money.

"It will only take about ten minutes." He said.

When ten minutes was over, I saw Shasa, She looked as good as new.

"You’re fixed!" I said.

"I feel much better now." Said Shasa.

"I’m glad." I said I grabbed Shasa.

While I was running out the door, I yelled Thank you to the shop keeper. When we got home, I ran to my room. Dorris was waiting for me…… It was the worst! When Dorris was there, he grabbed Sasha and I and threw us into a dark bag.

"Let us out!" Shasa cried.

Then we heard water. After a full 30 seconds of silence, we were in the air, and then we splashed in water. We had been tossed into the ocean by Dorris. I was scared, but Shasa calmed me down.

"It will be ok." Shasa said.

Then all of a sudden, water started to flow into the bag.

"No!" I yelled, and the bag started to sink.

By Lauren Ornelas
Published: 4/28/2008
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