Moonlight Curtain 5
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Here's a picture of the NEW Amina.
And this week I want you to leave comments saying who you picture each of the characters looking like.!!!
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My organs felt iced over. My limbs were stiff and i couldn't open my eyes. All I could do was scream in the intense pain I was feeling, like i was being bathed in liquid nitrogen. I arched my back as a particularly painful wave surged through me. Screams exploded from my lips. "Tie her arms down. The end is near." A voice said. Someone grabbed my stiff arms which were curled by my sides and pulled them straight. I screamed at the pain.
"Don't hurt her." Another, more familiar voice said. I felt tears start to fall down my cheeks.
"Sorry brother, she's just so fragile, I'm not used to it." A female voice responded.
"Why are you guys doing this to me!? Just kill me! Please! No more torture!!" I screamed/sobbed at them.
"Shhh..just lie still, it's almost over." The female voice said.
Suddenly, the worst pain I've ever felt burst through my whole body. I let out the loudest, most blood curdling scream in the world. I felt my shirt sticking to me with sweat. My arms were in pain, I started struggling against my shackles, keeping my arms out. My heart started to raise at an unhealthy rate. My heart..it was the only thing that felt warm. Suddenly, I felt it too start to feel icy and cold. It felt like the ice in my body was alive and slowly it was sneaking across my heart, icing it over. Just as I felt the last warmth leave my vital organ, keeping the blood flowing through me, the pain suddenly came to a screeching halt. My screams ceased. I just lay there, my eyes closed, taking deep breaths. I heard my heart give one last icy 'thunk.'
"Untie her." The female voice commanded. A bit of pity in her voice. They let my arms free and I hugged them to my chest. "Open your eyes Amina."
I did as I was told. My eye lids fluttered open, and I saw that I was on a bed, surrounded by people. I looked around the group and came to a quick realization..they were all unbelievably, and undeniably GORGEOUS! I gasped suddenly..My vision was prefect..I could see each and every single detail in the room i was in, and the people in the room. To my left was Victor. Images from the night before flashed through my head. Mutt. Victor being rude to him. Kissing. Then..Victor biting. me. My hand went to my neck, but there was no mark there.
I heard a quick intake of breath and it triggered something in me. Within seconds I was in a crouching position, my back pressed against the headboard of the bed I was in. My new and improved eyes flicked to the door where a girl was standing. She had long strawberry blonde hair, and big green eyes with a ring of violet around her pupil identical to Victor's. I hissed at her. Who was she? Was she trying to hurt me? Wait..did i just hiss? My hands darted to my mouth, i felt my teeth, nope. No fangs.
"Shh, don't be scared my dear." The same female voice I heard while in my painful state said. My eyes went to a lady standing directly in front of my, at the foot of my bed. She HAD to be the most beautiful woman I've ever seen. She had thick long black hair, braided down her back. Her eyes were deep ocean blue with the same violet ring round her pupil.
"Who are you...where am I..WHAT am i?" I asked.
The lady chuckled, "I am Amythest. You are in my kingdom, and you..are a vampire."
My eyes went to Victor.."You.." I hissed. I lunged off the bed in a flash and landed on Victor, I started throwing punches. It was then, I realized, my strength had been improved. I threw 3 lightening fast punches to his chest and once on his face. A big handsome guy with dark black spiky hair and gold eyes with the violet ring grabbed my arms, and held them behind my back. I started trying to get free but his grip tightened and increased in painfulness.
"Calm down my dear." He whispered with a velvety voice in my ear. I relaxed my body slowly. "Good."
"Would you like to see your new appearance my dear?" Amythest said.
"No appearance?"
"Yes. The transformation is known to change your appearance and for you...it has changed drastically."
I nodded and she handed me a mirror. Shakily I brought it up so I could see my new face. Staring back at me was ...the most...breathtaking girl. She had long pure white colored hair. Her bangs went straight across almost to her icy blue eyes with a violet ring encircling her pupil. Her skin was somewhat pale but flawless and her lips were a rosy colored pink. What struck me most bout this girl was her eyes...they were so different colored than all the other vampires in the room. All their eyes were either green, dark blue, or gold. But the girl looking back at me in the mirror, had the lightest blue eyes ever. I dropped the mirror in shock.
"Your beautiful." The girl at the door said.
And this week I want you to leave comments saying who you picture each of the characters looking like.!!!
*********
My organs felt iced over. My limbs were stiff and i couldn't open my eyes. All I could do was scream in the intense pain I was feeling, like i was being bathed in liquid nitrogen. I arched my back as a particularly painful wave surged through me. Screams exploded from my lips. "Tie her arms down. The end is near." A voice said. Someone grabbed my stiff arms which were curled by my sides and pulled them straight. I screamed at the pain.
"Don't hurt her." Another, more familiar voice said. I felt tears start to fall down my cheeks.
"Sorry brother, she's just so fragile, I'm not used to it." A female voice responded.
"Why are you guys doing this to me!? Just kill me! Please! No more torture!!" I screamed/sobbed at them.
"Shhh..just lie still, it's almost over." The female voice said.
Suddenly, the worst pain I've ever felt burst through my whole body. I let out the loudest, most blood curdling scream in the world. I felt my shirt sticking to me with sweat. My arms were in pain, I started struggling against my shackles, keeping my arms out. My heart started to raise at an unhealthy rate. My heart..it was the only thing that felt warm. Suddenly, I felt it too start to feel icy and cold. It felt like the ice in my body was alive and slowly it was sneaking across my heart, icing it over. Just as I felt the last warmth leave my vital organ, keeping the blood flowing through me, the pain suddenly came to a screeching halt. My screams ceased. I just lay there, my eyes closed, taking deep breaths. I heard my heart give one last icy 'thunk.'
"Untie her." The female voice commanded. A bit of pity in her voice. They let my arms free and I hugged them to my chest. "Open your eyes Amina."
I did as I was told. My eye lids fluttered open, and I saw that I was on a bed, surrounded by people. I looked around the group and came to a quick realization..they were all unbelievably, and undeniably GORGEOUS! I gasped suddenly..My vision was prefect..I could see each and every single detail in the room i was in, and the people in the room. To my left was Victor. Images from the night before flashed through my head. Mutt. Victor being rude to him. Kissing. Then..Victor biting. me. My hand went to my neck, but there was no mark there.
I heard a quick intake of breath and it triggered something in me. Within seconds I was in a crouching position, my back pressed against the headboard of the bed I was in. My new and improved eyes flicked to the door where a girl was standing. She had long strawberry blonde hair, and big green eyes with a ring of violet around her pupil identical to Victor's. I hissed at her. Who was she? Was she trying to hurt me? Wait..did i just hiss? My hands darted to my mouth, i felt my teeth, nope. No fangs.
"Shh, don't be scared my dear." The same female voice I heard while in my painful state said. My eyes went to a lady standing directly in front of my, at the foot of my bed. She HAD to be the most beautiful woman I've ever seen. She had thick long black hair, braided down her back. Her eyes were deep ocean blue with the same violet ring round her pupil.
"Who are you...where am I..WHAT am i?" I asked.
The lady chuckled, "I am Amythest. You are in my kingdom, and you..are a vampire."
My eyes went to Victor.."You.." I hissed. I lunged off the bed in a flash and landed on Victor, I started throwing punches. It was then, I realized, my strength had been improved. I threw 3 lightening fast punches to his chest and once on his face. A big handsome guy with dark black spiky hair and gold eyes with the violet ring grabbed my arms, and held them behind my back. I started trying to get free but his grip tightened and increased in painfulness.
"Calm down my dear." He whispered with a velvety voice in my ear. I relaxed my body slowly. "Good."
"Would you like to see your new appearance my dear?" Amythest said.
"No appearance?"
"Yes. The transformation is known to change your appearance and for you...it has changed drastically."
I nodded and she handed me a mirror. Shakily I brought it up so I could see my new face. Staring back at me was ...the most...breathtaking girl. She had long pure white colored hair. Her bangs went straight across almost to her icy blue eyes with a violet ring encircling her pupil. Her skin was somewhat pale but flawless and her lips were a rosy colored pink. What struck me most bout this girl was her eyes...they were so different colored than all the other vampires in the room. All their eyes were either green, dark blue, or gold. But the girl looking back at me in the mirror, had the lightest blue eyes ever. I dropped the mirror in shock.
"Your beautiful." The girl at the door said.
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