Missing Belle (Chapter 1)

Hi guys dis is my first story....hope u guys like it....pls read nd comment...I would like to read ur suggestions..
It was an afternoon when Belle, her brother Sam and their mom went to the beach for a walk. Belle was 16, a thin, fair and cute girl with dark brown hair. Sam was 12, he was tall and similar to his sister. Belle was playing in the water while Sam was making sand castles and their mom was watching them play. Mom told Belle not to go deep in to the sea but she didn't listen. She was always a bit naughty and her naughtiness always led to danger.

Belle was going deep in to the water but her mom kept on calling but she didn't listen. Now the water was very high it was almost till her neck. Suddenly she felt like someone was pulling her from under the water, she tried to walk but she couldn't. She was being pulled by some unknown force. Her mom started screaming and was crying badly as her daughter was no where to be seen.

People gathered around to know what the reason was and Sam told them everything while he himself started sobbing as she was his only sister. People searched for Belle everywhere in the sea but it was of no use. Then people consoled them while police gathered and the search continued.....

What happened to Belle?? Did she die?? or Has she been eaten by a sea monster?? or something.....pls read on to know what happened to Belle.....

By ~Ani~ jp
Published: 7/21/2009
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