Me Without You

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Me without you is like

Bees without honey
Fruit without vegetables
Cinimars without films

Bins without rubbish
Cars without drivers
Sky without clouds

Books without words
Talking without voices
Smiles without happiness

Things just wouldn't work that way.

By jennifer-louise croster
Published: 6/2/2009		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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