Me? Elemental Chapter 5 - Heartbroken
Well I feel alive after those fantastic comments & poll result ! And I'm gonna continue ! Bit of swearing and mega shocker! At the end don't skip to that though !
Aly J.A = Thanks u know I felt sooo sad reading about Carrie's last diary entry, u know how to make the readers feel upset ! I almost cried! =) Read Last Summer by Aly.J.A and Jules.
Melissa Cupido = Thank u for ur kind advice ill have to use speech marks this chapter and I know Thorne really is a witch she'd date every boy she see! I hope Charlie and cassy don't break up ! =( Read Summer fling by Melissa Cupido.
Marie= thank u sooo much I thought no one was readin it !
Jessica= Really ??!! thanks !
Angel lover = I know Jake is a really cute guy but he holds a dark secret .........=0
Angel's p.o.v:
"What u laughing at b**** ?" Thorne sneered at me putting her hand up to slap me. .................................I closed my eyes hoping for the worst. After a few moments I look. Up to see Thorne struggling. In Jake's firm grip and him saying" we're laughing at how ugly u are slut! "
Thorne curves her mouth into a perfect o like this O and sniggers. " why are you standing up for her, when I'm much better fine she might be richer but I'm more popular and I'm hot shes NOT !" I muster up some courage its my time to be the B**** I am I gasp and say " Oh YOU POPULAR ? THORNE IT'S NOT APRIL FOOLS DAY SWEETIE unless you mean popular by the 2 or 3 friends u have !"
Everyone around us looked at me and went ooooh . !!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The whole room was silent. Jake then said " Goooooooooo Angel, HOORAY!!!!" The room erupted with cheers. I had done it, I filled with pride I embarrassed that mega lameo - slutty-nutshell! Normally I was a shy and conserved girl but when people mess with me OH NO. Sometimes u have to live up to ur status to sporty-smart-popular-rich-pretty! Thorne just screams " SHUT UP F*****, U HOBO U LIVE OFF OTHER PEOPLE'S MONEY AND STEAL BOYFRIENDS NO WONDER ...NO WONDER UR SO POPULAR CAUSE PEOPLE FEEL SORRY FOR U!!! " I am genuinely taken aback and say " where u copy that off from the internet?" That set Thorne off she started pulling my hair and calling me all the names under the sun. Jake couldn't tolerate it anymore then slaps her HARD !!!
"DUMBASS JUST LEARN THAT I WILL NEVER LIKE U AND LEAVE HER ALONE SHES MY FRIEND! " friend? friend ! Just friend ! I felt sooo betrayed I loved him and he just thought of me as his friend. The bell rang at the perfect time, I ran out and sat alone on the bleachers teary faced. The wind blew my wild hair around the place I couldn't care anymore. Soo that's how it feels to be rejected ..................... Rosalind walked up to me and said " hey wats up buddy ? Hey wait why are you cryin for sweetie tell me????? " she tries to get the cat out of the bag but I wouldn't give in................................................... GO I say sadly. "but" rosalind tries to say but yet again I cut her off and say WILL U JUST FRICKIN GO ??!! She look upset but she says " bye angel " I just slump down and cry for quite some time.....
All these years I couldn't care about what a person felt and just pushed them away Now I know how it feels like to be those people. I enter the school dejectedly but who do I see snogging Thorne, wow no surprise Jake. WTF JAKE ?
Sooo I'll leave it there ooh a bit of a shocker !!!! =P XD =) =0
Rosetta.sxxxxxx
Melissa Cupido = Thank u for ur kind advice ill have to use speech marks this chapter and I know Thorne really is a witch she'd date every boy she see! I hope Charlie and cassy don't break up ! =( Read Summer fling by Melissa Cupido.
Marie= thank u sooo much I thought no one was readin it !
Jessica= Really ??!! thanks !
Angel lover = I know Jake is a really cute guy but he holds a dark secret .........=0
Angel's p.o.v:
"What u laughing at b**** ?" Thorne sneered at me putting her hand up to slap me. .................................I closed my eyes hoping for the worst. After a few moments I look. Up to see Thorne struggling. In Jake's firm grip and him saying" we're laughing at how ugly u are slut! "
Thorne curves her mouth into a perfect o like this O and sniggers. " why are you standing up for her, when I'm much better fine she might be richer but I'm more popular and I'm hot shes NOT !" I muster up some courage its my time to be the B**** I am I gasp and say " Oh YOU POPULAR ? THORNE IT'S NOT APRIL FOOLS DAY SWEETIE unless you mean popular by the 2 or 3 friends u have !"
Everyone around us looked at me and went ooooh . !!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The whole room was silent. Jake then said " Goooooooooo Angel, HOORAY!!!!" The room erupted with cheers. I had done it, I filled with pride I embarrassed that mega lameo - slutty-nutshell! Normally I was a shy and conserved girl but when people mess with me OH NO. Sometimes u have to live up to ur status to sporty-smart-popular-rich-pretty! Thorne just screams " SHUT UP F*****, U HOBO U LIVE OFF OTHER PEOPLE'S MONEY AND STEAL BOYFRIENDS NO WONDER ...NO WONDER UR SO POPULAR CAUSE PEOPLE FEEL SORRY FOR U!!! " I am genuinely taken aback and say " where u copy that off from the internet?" That set Thorne off she started pulling my hair and calling me all the names under the sun. Jake couldn't tolerate it anymore then slaps her HARD !!!
"DUMBASS JUST LEARN THAT I WILL NEVER LIKE U AND LEAVE HER ALONE SHES MY FRIEND! " friend? friend ! Just friend ! I felt sooo betrayed I loved him and he just thought of me as his friend. The bell rang at the perfect time, I ran out and sat alone on the bleachers teary faced. The wind blew my wild hair around the place I couldn't care anymore. Soo that's how it feels to be rejected ..................... Rosalind walked up to me and said " hey wats up buddy ? Hey wait why are you cryin for sweetie tell me????? " she tries to get the cat out of the bag but I wouldn't give in................................................... GO I say sadly. "but" rosalind tries to say but yet again I cut her off and say WILL U JUST FRICKIN GO ??!! She look upset but she says " bye angel " I just slump down and cry for quite some time.....
All these years I couldn't care about what a person felt and just pushed them away Now I know how it feels like to be those people. I enter the school dejectedly but who do I see snogging Thorne, wow no surprise Jake. WTF JAKE ?
Sooo I'll leave it there ooh a bit of a shocker !!!! =P XD =) =0
Rosetta.sxxxxxx
Post Comment | View Comments
