Love is Blind But It can see the Invisible

This is my first attempt to write a story. It includes soul searching and many things that we teenagers ignore....if you think its good and I should continue then please do comment....I want at least 6 comments to continue...
Since the dawn of the civilization man has been very curious to know about himself as well as about his surroundings which led to so-called 'discovery' of many things. But Castalia was the most say, 'incurious' creature of the world. she knew nothing about herself so she was never the most lovable or popular girl of the town but this story is about her where she is the heroine and how she discovers herself.

I am castalia, a 16 years old girl. I know you have never heard more weird name than this before, that's because it is a Greek word which means 'a source of inspiration'. My dad named me because I am an inspiration for him, according to him but I am still looking for an inspiration to at least live on this planet because I am finding it very impossible to live this life anymore. it doesn't mean that I am suffering from depression but like everyone
else I too need an inspiration, a reason, an aim , ambition and passion to live life which
is worthwhile.

It's 6:00 am , time to get up from bed or I would say the transporter that carry me to my beautiful land of dreams where I am at least happy and can be what I want to. sun is at horizon and going to show itself from its hiding place in heaven where it is hid behind blanket of clouds. "castalia, if it is not so hard to do, would you please get up from that bed"-shouted my mum again in that rude tone which I hate the most. "yea, I'll be downstairs within minutes".- I said.

I got up and took bath not so refreshing wore skinny jeans and a top. I usually don't care about what am I wearing because nobody ever look at me so I dress casually and reached downstairs.
"Do not eat too much"-said mum. "will you please at least not interrupt me when I am eating, I am not fat"- I said "but you will be so"- said mum. I pushed the plate away and walked away.

I like to go to school walking because I want to take full advantage of living in a marvelous town of lakes.

I reached the school. I moved to mathematics class which I hated the most but my mum left no choice for me. The class was full of proudly peacocks. All were nerds but they were so proud of themselves that they make me feel so dumb and stupid. But my favorite class is music and English literature.

I was walking through the corridor and some cheerleaders were making fun of my hair because I never cared about tying or styling it nicely. Well it happens mostly. my one and only friend Tania, a very beautiful red hair girl with the most perfect features approached me. "your mom and I bought you a beautiful dress, why didn't you wear that instead of this not so cool dress"-said tania

"Please tania stop"-I said . "ok I am leaving"-said Tania. it was the physical education class time which I hated because I have to wear shorts which is another reason cheerleaders making fun of me.
"Oh look ugly duckling is coming"-cheerleaders. I saw zeke laughing at me and looking at my legs.
I was very embarrassed and disturbed so I ran away from the school.
I was crying badly because I was hurt. I went to my favorite place, beside a lake on a rusted old bench.
I hid my guitar there and started playing it . but suddenly I heard tinkling of gravel.

............................End................................................................
Do you think i am capable enough to be a writer?
Yup, you are a good writer
You can but you need to improve a lot
Heck no!
Not so interesting story
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Published: 8/7/2010
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