Lost One

I wrote this for my great grandfather. Please comment.
Whats it like to lose someone you love
You feel hopeless
Like a chunk of you is missing
Everything seems dark
You feel the need for help
The worst part is
Knowing you'll never get to see them again.

By shannon freeman
Published: 6/5/2009		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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