Losing Sight

All of my poems are about death, suicide, love, vampires… I'd b so thankful if the people who read my poems left a comment about them… so that I could have an idea if my work is good enough... thx
Scattered ashes fall in my wake
Raging hatred inspires
Clouds of smoke fill an empty soul
Burning immortal fires

Blood splattered walls
Gnawed through ropes that bind
Thinking thoughts out of nothing
Of the most desperate kind

Can't you see the undying sadness
The pain and the creeping madness?
The stell-clad sky which threatens to fall
And in glowing embers cover us all

By André Ribeiro
Published: 12/25/2006		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
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