Losing It

Title sort of says it all.
An empty blah
A wasted effort
A feeling of falling
With no support
Pointless gestures
Aimless speech
Happiness lies
Beyond my reach

A pathetic
Struggle to best
The meager efforts
Of the rest
Feels like I
Can't be enough
Feels like I'm
Lost in the rough

All exploits
Come to an end
And I'm lost
Without a friend
Tell me
Am I insane
Or have I
Just lost the game.

By Katarina Harrington
Published: 6/22/2009		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
 
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Fantabulistic, write more!
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