Look Into my Eyes

I wrote this poem when I was depressed....plz comment.

When you look into my eyes
You notice the fear, hurt
And sense of betrayal in them
You also see in them the love, kindness,
But behind all of that I someone who's
Scarred, abused, broken, and hurt
Her eyes are begging for your help to set her free
And give her your love and support to help her heal