Little Tim

My best one yet.
Little Tim went the fair
Got a balloon
That was the color maroon
And floated up in the air

"LOOK UP" said the people down below
As the rain started to fall
And his dad started to call
And the wind started to blow

He went up and up laughing with joy
And all the people called and shouted
And the streets were all crowd
As that all stared up at the flying boy

He started to untie it and he started to fall
And without any help at all
He landed safely on the ground
And then he found

He floated up so high
Up passed the sky
And he landed on the moon
All because of that balloon
What do you think?
I love the color maroon
Its okay
I don't like it
loved it
Hated it
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Published: 9/1/2010
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