Life is Complicated - Chapter 4
I kinda mixed what Evan and His family were. Just Read. AND COMMENT!
Hey Guys, Well from the poll, I just noticed something. Most of you guys voted for Vampire. But I received some complaints about not wanting the Mather's family to be Vampires. So Instead to make everyone happy, I'm mixing everything TOGETHER.
Yep. You'll see what I'm talking about in the story. Well more into it.
From that 1st note thingy. (RESPONSES)
@Bex. I didn't mean I was going to like quit. I don't want to. I want my story to blossom into something more.....COOL. Ya know? And thanks, for the advice. I noticed that too. I mean, come on there are POLLS. They are just so Cute and Click-able.
@RR:D : I'm not just looking for comments. I'm looking for feedback, and things others want in my stories. It's not just my story, it's everyone's. and I want them all to contribute. I want them, to be part of the stories. TO BE ONE WITH IT.
@Rachel McManus : I'M LIKE SO HONORED. Well I'm really like shocked you commented. I love your stories! And MEGA thanks for the advice. Yes, they do seem to like the polls. So I may take you guy's advice. And not post polls, only if necessary. Thanks you Guys.
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Leilani's P.O.V
We stood so close together. The moon shined brightly tonight. It was perfect,he began to move closer to my face, and I stood there waiting for something to happen. He was just 2 inches from my face. His Sweet breath was on my face, and I couldn't wait for his lips to come onto mine.
But, Just as usual SOMETHING HAD TO RUIN THIS PERFECT MOMENT. Ugh, why couldn't my phone been on SILENT?! Evan, backed away from me, and sat on the bench. I took my phone out, to see what had to mess up my PERFECT moment. Great, Thank You DREW.
"Lani, Can we talk please, I'm sorry for doing that. But she was just there, and so SO hot. Come on, babe. You know I love you, text me back."
I sighed and Evan looked towards me. I mouthed that one name that made me feel like I had VOMIT in overflowing in my entire body. I shuddered, and walked toward the slides.
Evan was there in a few seconds.
I smiled, and looked into his eyes. I just melted. He took me in his arms and grinned. Finally, we would have the moment back. I closed my eyes, and in no time his lips were on mine.
His lips, were soft but firm. They were just perfect on mine. I never felt such a strong pull to a guy. It was like Magic. Something was cast upon us. But I couldn't figure it out.
My train of thought was interrupted but Evan's moan.
Whoa, I seemed to have gotten straight into his arms, closer to his body. Then his lips were on my neck, and they were trying to grasp my skin or try to..bite it. I succeeded from getting out of his arms, and looked at him.
He stared at me with wild eyes, his lips were pulled back to bare his White teeth.
"Evan, what's wrong" He snarled and I fell backwards. He started to walk towards me, our magic left. I stumbled backwards,and was pinned to a wall.
I breathed heavily, and waited for something tragic to happen. I was to scared to even react to anything.
From the side of me, I heard a growl. I looked toward my side, to see October Running at an incredible speed, she tackled Evan, hard to the ground.
He punched her in the face, and they fought there on the ground. After a while of fighting, she finally restrained him. Then More, people appeared out of thin air. I sat there witnessing everything that was occurring.
"Leilani's there..." Evan mumbled.
October looked my way, and her eyes changed color into a gray. Fear crossed before me, and I swear she could smell it.
She walked towards me and keeled down.
"Leilani, What you saw here never happened alright ?" she said quietly
"But it did, October!" I told her, while I hugged my knees
"Just close, your eyes and everything will be back to normal." She said, as her hand came to my face.
I closed, my eyes, and I felt her cold hand cover my eyes. She mumbled a few words, and then all I felt was darkness.
I guess, I must have fell asleep, but I woke up in my bed. My hand went to my head, and I began to rub it. Gosh, Hangover? I didn't remember anything. Except for when me and Evan...Kissed.
My fingers touched my lips. I smiled, at the memory of his lips on mine. Today, was going to be one heck of a day, I got up and ran to the restroom, Yea. You know the rest.
As, I walked towards the bus stop, hoping Evan would be at his house. I replayed our night in my head.
It was so, magical and perfect. I grinned and ran into something hard. I looked up to see Evan, looking back down to me.
I blushed and he stood there, with a grimace on his face. I raised an eyebrow,and he turned his head away.
Wow, Cold shoulder.
"Evan, what's wrong?" I put my hand on his arm, but he pulled away.
"Just Go away, and don't talk to me anymore Leilani."
My heart dropped to my feet, when I heard his say that.
Tears welled in my eyes. "Why?" my voice started cracking. He looked at me with sadness. But put on his serious mask to cover it.
"Just go." I looked at him one last time, before I started walking again.
Tears fell to my cheeks and onto the pavement. I can't believe that just happened.
I wasn't going to let this,happen. I was going to get to the bottom of this.
I could feel his eyes, burning into my back. So, I ran toward the bus stop. Tears, and everything.
The End.
PLEASE COMMENT ! I WANT FEEDBACK. LOVE YOU GUYS. GIVE ME SOME IDEAS !
Yep. You'll see what I'm talking about in the story. Well more into it.
From that 1st note thingy. (RESPONSES)
@Bex. I didn't mean I was going to like quit. I don't want to. I want my story to blossom into something more.....COOL. Ya know? And thanks, for the advice. I noticed that too. I mean, come on there are POLLS. They are just so Cute and Click-able.
@RR:D : I'm not just looking for comments. I'm looking for feedback, and things others want in my stories. It's not just my story, it's everyone's. and I want them all to contribute. I want them, to be part of the stories. TO BE ONE WITH IT.
@Rachel McManus : I'M LIKE SO HONORED. Well I'm really like shocked you commented. I love your stories! And MEGA thanks for the advice. Yes, they do seem to like the polls. So I may take you guy's advice. And not post polls, only if necessary. Thanks you Guys.
_______________________________________________
Leilani's P.O.V
We stood so close together. The moon shined brightly tonight. It was perfect,he began to move closer to my face, and I stood there waiting for something to happen. He was just 2 inches from my face. His Sweet breath was on my face, and I couldn't wait for his lips to come onto mine.
But, Just as usual SOMETHING HAD TO RUIN THIS PERFECT MOMENT. Ugh, why couldn't my phone been on SILENT?! Evan, backed away from me, and sat on the bench. I took my phone out, to see what had to mess up my PERFECT moment. Great, Thank You DREW.
"Lani, Can we talk please, I'm sorry for doing that. But she was just there, and so SO hot. Come on, babe. You know I love you, text me back."
I sighed and Evan looked towards me. I mouthed that one name that made me feel like I had VOMIT in overflowing in my entire body. I shuddered, and walked toward the slides.
Evan was there in a few seconds.
I smiled, and looked into his eyes. I just melted. He took me in his arms and grinned. Finally, we would have the moment back. I closed my eyes, and in no time his lips were on mine.
His lips, were soft but firm. They were just perfect on mine. I never felt such a strong pull to a guy. It was like Magic. Something was cast upon us. But I couldn't figure it out.
My train of thought was interrupted but Evan's moan.
Whoa, I seemed to have gotten straight into his arms, closer to his body. Then his lips were on my neck, and they were trying to grasp my skin or try to..bite it. I succeeded from getting out of his arms, and looked at him.
He stared at me with wild eyes, his lips were pulled back to bare his White teeth.
"Evan, what's wrong" He snarled and I fell backwards. He started to walk towards me, our magic left. I stumbled backwards,and was pinned to a wall.
I breathed heavily, and waited for something tragic to happen. I was to scared to even react to anything.
From the side of me, I heard a growl. I looked toward my side, to see October Running at an incredible speed, she tackled Evan, hard to the ground.
He punched her in the face, and they fought there on the ground. After a while of fighting, she finally restrained him. Then More, people appeared out of thin air. I sat there witnessing everything that was occurring.
"Leilani's there..." Evan mumbled.
October looked my way, and her eyes changed color into a gray. Fear crossed before me, and I swear she could smell it.
She walked towards me and keeled down.
"Leilani, What you saw here never happened alright ?" she said quietly
"But it did, October!" I told her, while I hugged my knees
"Just close, your eyes and everything will be back to normal." She said, as her hand came to my face.
I closed, my eyes, and I felt her cold hand cover my eyes. She mumbled a few words, and then all I felt was darkness.
I guess, I must have fell asleep, but I woke up in my bed. My hand went to my head, and I began to rub it. Gosh, Hangover? I didn't remember anything. Except for when me and Evan...Kissed.
My fingers touched my lips. I smiled, at the memory of his lips on mine. Today, was going to be one heck of a day, I got up and ran to the restroom, Yea. You know the rest.
As, I walked towards the bus stop, hoping Evan would be at his house. I replayed our night in my head.
It was so, magical and perfect. I grinned and ran into something hard. I looked up to see Evan, looking back down to me.
I blushed and he stood there, with a grimace on his face. I raised an eyebrow,and he turned his head away.
Wow, Cold shoulder.
"Evan, what's wrong?" I put my hand on his arm, but he pulled away.
"Just Go away, and don't talk to me anymore Leilani."
My heart dropped to my feet, when I heard his say that.
Tears welled in my eyes. "Why?" my voice started cracking. He looked at me with sadness. But put on his serious mask to cover it.
"Just go." I looked at him one last time, before I started walking again.
Tears fell to my cheeks and onto the pavement. I can't believe that just happened.
I wasn't going to let this,happen. I was going to get to the bottom of this.
I could feel his eyes, burning into my back. So, I ran toward the bus stop. Tears, and everything.
The End.
PLEASE COMMENT ! I WANT FEEDBACK. LOVE YOU GUYS. GIVE ME SOME IDEAS !
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