Lie With Me...

I just wrote this last night and I absolutely love it. Please comment and let me know what you think!!
Lie With Me...
Hey guys, firstly to all the "Taken" fans, the next part will be out soon. Also read the new story by Lexie and Josie Amazing entitled "A Deadly Seduction" it's something different and looks promising! mwa enjoy the poetry.

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Lie with me tonight
Caress me with your gentle hands
Let’s talk until the sun comes up
About our hopes, dreams and future plans
Love me until the day I die and thereafter
Kiss me every moment, don’t make me suffer

Take away the pain that others bring to me
Tell me sweet stories about what we should be
Hold me close, hold me tight, and hold on for dear life
Be my forever, my heart and I’ll be your wife
Do this for me, do this for us.
   By Crying Rose
Published: 8/5/2009
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