Killer on the loose

Just a short story. Tell me what you think. It's a little twisted!
This was the fourth victim.

The body was hidden inside a closet in the house.

Each of the victims had been killed in the same way. Even though scientists don't know how yet, it was clear that they were ripped open and conscious wile that happened.

At first impressions you would think that some kind of animal did this -
the bodies were brutally ripped apart and hollowed out, with blood dripping from all sides - but then, an animal wouldn't have stashed its kill away so cleverly (under a bed, inside a closet, some were in the forest.). And an animal wouldn't be aiming for the vitals. The first victim was completely ripped open and its kidneys were taken out, the second's eyes were polled out and the third victims head was cracked open and his brain was taken away. None of these organs were ever found.

This time the chest was smashed in and the heart was gone. But the most disturbing part of all of this was that in the now open spaces the killer would leave a tape with a film of how he had taken its victims. You never could saw his face, but you did see how the victims beg and plea for death as the killer slowly and painfully polled open the bodies and took out the organs.

Blood spatted everywhere, and the victims................................they were fully aware as this happened.

It's just terrible. Just imagine having your eyes polled out of your scull slowly and painfully, and you having to be alive to feel that pain until the very last second.
What kind of monster would do this?

Rip someone open with his bare hands?

That, I'll let you decide..........................................................................

By Lynn Faria
Published: 10/17/2009
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