Kill Death Destroy

Um I wrote it last night. Please tell me what you think.
Every time I start to think hey life’s not that bad,
That little demon comes to remind me,
No your life’s hell, actually what life your not even real,
Hey something good's happening,
But wait don't enjoy it,
Remember you’re not allowed to laugh,
Feel happy or appreciate,
You must lie, cry, and wish to die,
Please stop making me suffer,
I just want to, enjoy, be loved,
And not hate myself,
No you must learn to live with it,
Or better yet give in to the temptation,
Let your blood flow until it runs out,
And your heart go cold, as it stops beating,
And remember, you will be lonely for ever,
Cause I will take everyone away,
So do as I say, or you shall pay,
Make sure you show hate and destruction upon the world,
For that is what I made you for,
And girl, as much as you try,
You can't escape your destiny,
I have your soul, and you will burn in hell,
Your motto should be, kill, death, destroy,
Cause that is what I made you for,
If you get used to the pain,
It shouldn't hurt anymore,
Ok don't forget what I say.

By midnight purple
Published: 12/18/2006
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