Just my Luck - Chapter 1 Revised!!
I didn't like the way the first part was:((
Chapter 1:
I stepped back in the club.I was at the hottest club in town 'the Stereotype.' I know cool name but I come here for a reason, I'm on a mission. A mission to wipe out every single vampire that I see.
Let me tell you a little about myself. My name is Scarlett Mason and I recently turned 19. I have long inky black curly hair with blue-green eyes. I'm 5'7 with a light tan, I'm a little muscular too. I'm forgetful, smart, deceptive, cunning and most of all I'm a Slayer, yes a vampire slayer.
I have 2 younger brothers Grayson who's 14 and Gidieon who's 7. I go to Magell College but I usually stay at my parents house, my house or Miles house. I have a room at my parents, I have my own apartment and Mile's room.
You're probably wondering about Miles. Well his name is Miles Sythen he's 22. He has shaggy blonde hair with green eyes, he's 5'9, slightly tan and well muscled. He's the spitting image of Jesse McCartney. He's my Slayer partner, he goes to the same college as me and he has a 3 year old son, Tommy.
Miles was married to Karen, they were in love and had Tommy. Sad thing was that Karen got killed my vampires. Yup vampires, so now you know why we kill em. I look just like Karen so Tommy always calls me mommy, we've tried telling him that I'm not his mommy but he won't listen so we just go with it.
Anyway back to the club, I had just killed a vampire and was going back into the club to see if I could find another blooksucker. I wasn't really the party type girl but the bloodsuckers liked to party. I went to the bar and ordered a sprite with vodka.
I sipped my drink slowly while I looked around the club. I was getting bored with the club. I had killed 2 tonight so why not go home?
I got up and weaved through the dancers to get to the door. I had just gotten to the door when someone grabbed my wrist. I spun around.
God he was handsome. He had shaggy black hair with dark gray eyes, they reminded me of the moon. He was tall and very muscled, he was pale and had a nice white smile. Too bad he was a vampire:(
"Leaving so early?"
It was only 8 but I was bored.
"I got bored" I said with a shrug.
He chuckled "those other 2 men didn't interest you?"
Now he was pissing me off.
"Nope, no let go" I said tugging my arm.
"What's the rush?"
"My son likes for me to tuck him in at night."
He looked taken back but he let go of my wrist. I turned on my heel and walked out the door, he followed.
He leaned against the lightpole "by the way I'm Alexander."
I turned and smirked at him "Scarlett."
He whistled as I stepped into the taxi, I gave the driver Mile's address.
I stepped back in the club.I was at the hottest club in town 'the Stereotype.' I know cool name but I come here for a reason, I'm on a mission. A mission to wipe out every single vampire that I see.
Let me tell you a little about myself. My name is Scarlett Mason and I recently turned 19. I have long inky black curly hair with blue-green eyes. I'm 5'7 with a light tan, I'm a little muscular too. I'm forgetful, smart, deceptive, cunning and most of all I'm a Slayer, yes a vampire slayer.
I have 2 younger brothers Grayson who's 14 and Gidieon who's 7. I go to Magell College but I usually stay at my parents house, my house or Miles house. I have a room at my parents, I have my own apartment and Mile's room.
You're probably wondering about Miles. Well his name is Miles Sythen he's 22. He has shaggy blonde hair with green eyes, he's 5'9, slightly tan and well muscled. He's the spitting image of Jesse McCartney. He's my Slayer partner, he goes to the same college as me and he has a 3 year old son, Tommy.
Miles was married to Karen, they were in love and had Tommy. Sad thing was that Karen got killed my vampires. Yup vampires, so now you know why we kill em. I look just like Karen so Tommy always calls me mommy, we've tried telling him that I'm not his mommy but he won't listen so we just go with it.
Anyway back to the club, I had just killed a vampire and was going back into the club to see if I could find another blooksucker. I wasn't really the party type girl but the bloodsuckers liked to party. I went to the bar and ordered a sprite with vodka.
I sipped my drink slowly while I looked around the club. I was getting bored with the club. I had killed 2 tonight so why not go home?
I got up and weaved through the dancers to get to the door. I had just gotten to the door when someone grabbed my wrist. I spun around.
God he was handsome. He had shaggy black hair with dark gray eyes, they reminded me of the moon. He was tall and very muscled, he was pale and had a nice white smile. Too bad he was a vampire:(
"Leaving so early?"
It was only 8 but I was bored.
"I got bored" I said with a shrug.
He chuckled "those other 2 men didn't interest you?"
Now he was pissing me off.
"Nope, no let go" I said tugging my arm.
"What's the rush?"
"My son likes for me to tuck him in at night."
He looked taken back but he let go of my wrist. I turned on my heel and walked out the door, he followed.
He leaned against the lightpole "by the way I'm Alexander."
I turned and smirked at him "Scarlett."
He whistled as I stepped into the taxi, I gave the driver Mile's address.
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