Just A Dream

When Rayla Santacee was 14 she always watched ''16 an pregnate on MTV. She always thought to herself that she would never end up like that when she got older. She had the dreams of going to college and starting a family after. But suddenly on the night of her 16th birthday she does something that will change her life forever.
Rayla Santacee just turned 16. Shes a beautiful girl with black hair almost to her waste a sharp blue eyes but when she meets the sexy Brian Heck she just can't get over his beautiful shaggy brown hair and sea green eyes. Will they take things to far on the night of her 16th birthday and will it change both their lives forever?? Or is it all.......JUST A DREAM.
Do you have any suggestions I'm a new writer and I'm willing to take anything you are willing to share
Little more detail plz
What the heck u call urself a writer??
Plz pick a different subject I dnt care for this one
Plz stop u need help
Other-ill post what I think in a comment
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Published: 10/26/2010
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