Judgement Day

Something really random I wrote when I was bored in I.C.T, I looked out the window, and the sky reminded me of Judgement Day... can you please comment this? lol =]
Clouded skies, the sun disappears behind the hills,
Fire breaks lose throughout the streets,
Lightening strikes the earth from above,
Causing chaos for the sinners beneath,
Screaming in agonizing pain,
As the Angels of Death ride through the sky,
Laughing at those struck down,
Leaving them to die…
As the sinners cry in distress,
And cower away in fear…
They realize that Judgement day
Is finally here…

By ...†...gemma b...†...
Published: 6/13/2008
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