Jilted Love

I was jilted by my fiancée. She loved me too but one of my friend entered to her life and destroyed our relationship.
A hasty call makes us friends,
Lisa! Can you remember the day
You become my friend- I'm your chum?
Day by day - You loved me a lot and I love you too;
I dived your eyes into; -
to pinch your love you trove for me; you gave me all;-
your body, your heart and your soul.
You never see me before - I never you;
Still you gave me what can you!
one pal touched your heart out of the blue;-
In Xmas evening we three traveling in the boat bystander
the river Hooghly at Out tram Ghat - I pose you -
"Do you love me Liza? Do you love me?" You didn't retort,
just kept a mum- bending your head under the knees;
Gloomy shadow of the Earth scrambling my heart -
I didn't see you any more- just mutter-" Lisa! Are u become
a Pos? Are you became a Pos? Perhaps not!"
I lunged the brook into - to distill my jilted love.

By kobir Syed
Published: 2/16/2009		 Your Contributions: Tell us a Poem! You don't have to be a Buzzle.com author to contribute to Poetry Bee. Submit a poem of your own right now!
 
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