It Was My Mistake

A flash fiction story about a man who walks into a bar that wasn't really a bar.
Walked into a place I thought was a bar, my mistake.

Men in suits turn my way. Have I interrupted a meeting, my mistake.

My hair’s a mess. Haven’t shaved in days, my mistake.

Looking at boots covered in mud, I wished I never walked through the door. It was my mistake.

"Can I help you," someone asked.

"I thought this was a bar. I came to have a beer."

Evidently, this wasn’t that type of place, my mistake.

I grab for the knob, a rough hand gripped mine.

"Sorry son can’t let you do that."

My mistake...
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Published: 9/23/2011
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