If You Would Leave

Getting rid of your soul, will not make this better.
Dizziness,
Blurriness,
Allusiveness,
Bluffness,
Delicateness,

All the things that at the end of you wonder,
if it was the past or will be the future,
as time flashes by your eyes like thunder,
any day could be the last,
you think as the day your living as a miscast,
not only is your life there, but its also in the past,

And you think that people will remember you,
like blanking out, like closing in,
the memory of you will cause them pain,
not only in but also out,
they will move on, with or without,
you,

Know wonder if you would like to go,
wonder if you would like to leave,
I may not think so, or I may believe,
you think you would hurt no one, that’s yourself

Now your wrong and confused,
an error,
a mistake,
Incorrect,
Immoral,
Unethical,
that is what you would be doing if you leave,
this world and your disbelieve.

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By maggie gutierrez
Published: 11/23/2007
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