Heaven

This is my third poem. Thanks for the good feedback on my other poems. Ima keep posting, and maybe work on an article too. Please continue giving me your opinion,good or bad:)
I used to believe
Completely and entirely
Honestly trusted there was a He
Then I realized everyone was lying to me
But as many people don't
I grew up, maybe too fast
Though it saddens me that others won't

Deeply hurts
That their caught in a fantasy life
Strongly burns
How they've always descended the wife
Because it's written in that stupid book
One who's quotes aren't a fact
But with misery, real their took
Were their told which role to act

They're supposed to fear what their also supposed to love
Dividing by color, not necessarily racist
But as they would do to a crow and a dove
It's new times, we might as well face it
That what to some is known as holy and divine
To in reality is foully considered a crime
They want the perfect human being

To a high twisted standard
But of course never like their King
Who everybody lives under
A King who's all to ready, to fill passes to hell
Calling all who oppose, a dark angel
A monstrosity who from "heaven" fell
Ahh so now to heaven

That fake promise in exchange of devotion
The after life reserved to live in
Now that's the Christians' potion
To go for the weak who fear dying
Then invoke in their minds of that paradise
Eternal life, how many wouldn't be trying
Living their only life in a lie, would be the price
Did you like it, Or was it difficult to understand?
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Published: 4/30/2010
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