Heart Broken

This is a poem about a guy who breaks up with you and you are depressed but you start to think about revenge. I am only 12…
Possessed by a feeling of sorrow,
he's left you feeling hollow,
remembering the moment your heart broke,
and the words that he sadly spoke.
you trap yourself in your room,
making it your destined-to-be tomb,
the moments he took in your life,
are stabbing you like a knife,
you can't believe you gave him your heart,
then he cruelly tore it all apart,
you feel enraged at what he's done,
he probably thought it was fun,
now all you can think about is revenge,
you'd love him to fall off Stonehenge,
change him into an illusion,
make him feel some real emotion,
you leave your room and get up and about,
his love you are better without.
   By Nikki Wheidt
Published: 2/26/2007
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