Happy Ending? I Think Not

Cassandra Formant's life was going great. Perfect best friend. Perfect boyfriend. Maybe she'll have a happy ending... But aren't happy endings only in fairy tales?
It was the beginning of November and Cassandra was excited to get to school in her brand new Volkswagen. Her sister, Cathy was going to be a sophomore in Fairfield Academy so she stopped riding the bus. Cassandra woke up and took a shower. She refused to turn off her alarm radio seeing that it would possibly mess up the party atmosphere. Tonight would be the night that she and her boyfriend, Mateo do it for the first time. She carefully looked at what outfit to put on. She closely examined each pair of jeans, sweater, shoes, and accessories. She picked a Burberry trench coat, a black turtle neck, black leggings, and black Uggs. Her long curly hair was carefully braided into a French braid. She put on a headband and completed the look with two medium-sized pink pearls. As she darted out of the door, she clipped on her Michael Kors wrist watch and looked at herself in the mirror. "Wow Cassie, looking good." She smiled at the mirror and headed to her car.

Cassandra was waiting for her sister to descend from the stairs so she began to apply her makeup. She had delicate brown eyes that matched perfectly with her chestnut colored hair. She applied brown eyeshadow and applied Chapstick. She glances at her iPhone. It's 7:00 a.m. She honks the horn on her car. Cathy walks out of the house in a messy bun, a v-neck t-shirt, high-waisted jeans cut offs and spotted leggings. She wore chunky socks with boots on. Wow, what a fashion statement, Cassandra thought. "Took you long enough Cathy," Cassandra said with a slight tone of sarcasm.

They walked into school and split up. Mateo walked up to Cassandra and wrapped his arms around her. "I missed you baby," he whispered in her ear. Before Cassandra could response, her best friend Analicia walks up to them. "Hey guys," she gives Mateo a longing stare and walks away. "Baby, I'm gonna go to my locker. I'll take you to lunch today." He gives her a peck on the cheek and walks to the direction where Analicia was walking. Cassandra was lucky. She had an amazing best friend and a perfect boyfriend... Everything was just perfect. She walked toward her first period, math.

She looks to the side and sees a couple making out. Heavily. He's touching her in places that shouldn't be touched. The couple moves to the janitor's closet. You hear moans and screams. She keeps walking until one of the screams is Mateo's name.
Should I continue writing?
Yeah, seems interesting.
Yes, but change the plot.
No.
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Published: 11/4/2011
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