Gorey Fairy Tales - 2nd Story In Series

Best One So Far! Goldilocks! Please Comment And Pole!
"La, la, la, la, la, la" Goldilocks Sang
She was skipping quickly down the long, eerie forest path. Goldilocks thought she heard a noise behind her so she turned round whilst skipping. BOOM! Slammed into an old oak tree. Stupid Goldilocks. Ouch. Her nose was hurt and bleeding so she walked the rest of her journey. She saw a huge mansion. The biggest she's ever seen. Luckily, she had her mobile with her, so she texted her friend, Blondilocks. Well you probably know what she looks like; it says it in the name.

Blondilocks arrived with a plaster - for goldilocks' nose because she walked into a tree- two black burglar hats, so they could hide in the mansion, and two burglar suits. They got dressed behind a tree and headed towards the mansion.

The front door was open. So they glided gracefully through the front door like Ballerinas. There were loads of small pancakes on the table with tons and tons of caviar on top. Slowly, they crept into the giant house making sure they didn't make too much noise. Goldilocks did not like caviar but she thought she could sell it for lots of money, so she put the load of it in her handbag. But Blondilocks did like pancakes, Goldilocks too. So they scoffed the lot until there was none left.

They saw a very rare Elizabethan chair. But Goldilocks does not like rare antiques so she sits down with her big behind and SMASH! Goes the chair.
"Oops," Goldilocks said sarcastically
"Ha, ha, ha" replied Blondilocks
"I'm extremely full," said Goldilocks, "I'm Going upstairs to take a nap."
"Kk." Said Blondilocks
Goldilocks clambered into the smallest bed. It has Toy Story sheets so it probably belonged to a young child. The mattress was too bouncy so Goldilocks got out of the bed leaving filthy messes from her feet which included something that a dog had done. She got into the next bed which had plain sheets so probably it belonged to the adult of the family. She got in and fell asleep straight away on the mattress as soft as fluffy clouds. Blondilocks took Goldilocks' phone and dialed 999...

Goldilocks woke up surrounded by policeman. She was breathless. Where was Blondilocks? She thought.
"Where's my friend!" snapped Goldilocks
"She is not here any more." The policeman said in a strange voice
"Who are you!" She Screamed
"I am who I am" the policeman said in a un-human voice
"You ate my pancakes." He said in a very gentle voice
"Do you live here?" Goldilocks replied "I'm so sorry"
"You stole my caviar" he replied in a harsh tone
"I said I'm Sorry!" Goldilocks exclaimed
"You broke my antique chair" the policeman snapped
The policeman grinned malevolently showing thousands of razor-sharp teeth covered in ruby red blood and blonde hair in-between the gaps.
"What have you done with my frien..."
Goldilocks never finished that sentence. Instead, blood-curdling screams haunted the gloomy air in the paranormal house.

The End
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Published: 3/21/2011
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