Gift Of Life

My first poem... To my husband
He was not the character I like
I tried to avoid him all the while
He shed tears when he couldn’t take it
I felt pity on him for that
He slowly moved into my life

Now,
I can’t imagine a life without him
We are a happy couple
Mesmerized in the magic called 'LOVE'

By Sonia Robinson
Published: 2/11/2008
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