Gates to Love - Ch. 00 (This was Supposed To Be the First One)
This is where Jake met the girl of his dreams you'll also find out about her in Chapter 5.....sorry if it's really late I had a lot if homework, I lost my phone (T . T), and I had look for this Chapter.... Enjoy!!!
One Foggy Lunar night, a 15 year old girl named Naomi was walking on her way home by herself after her best friend Kara's birthday party. Naomi was wearing a small flowing glittery light blue dress, white eye shadow as bright as the stars, clear crystal high heel shoes, glittery lipstick, and light brown hair had crystals, glitter, and a blue rose in it. Naomi was enjoying the cool breeze and the quietness of the night,but then....that feeling stopped when she heard footsteps behind her and when she turned around she saw 6 guys with bats, metal pipes, chains, and a gun...and then chased her...
Naomi started running..she passed Mc Donald's, your house, my house, etc...then she came to a dead end at an abandoned school and she was surrounded, then the youngest walked up tp Naomi and said,"Now you know that you shouldn't be out at night and should just stay home with your mommy....",then Naomi slapped his face and spit on him and then he said,"Big mistake..." they were about to attack her, but then they heard a loud rumbling noise... They looked behind them and saw a 16 year old boy with wavy black hair covering up 1 eye, he wore a ripped up shirt and torn jeans and Jordan's...he was riding his motorcycle then at top speed, then the 2 oldest guys ran toward him while the others stayed near Naomi...
When the 2 guys their bats and pipes at the black haired guy, he dodged it, flipped himself and the motorcycle in the air then, he grasped 2 knives and threw it at 1 guys leg and arm, the other guy tried to run away but then the black haired guy chuckled then he threw rope at the guys feet and made him fall and then he landed in front of the other 4 guys and Naomi.Then he started to step off his motor cycle and 3 guys ran away, while the youngest who was 13 stayed behind..shaking. Then the guy stepped in front of him and whispered," I know who you are and your mom's coming for you..." the boy was about to say the guy's name, when all of a sudden his mom pulled him by the ear and threw him into the car and drive off. Naomi thought the guy was cool..only for a second and while he was laughing Naomi made a run for it...when he finally turned around Naomi was gone...
Then when he heard a dog barking on his left, he turned and saw Naomi running toward Target, then he got his motorcycle and left. Then Naomi stopped running in front of KFC when she heard a motorcycle behind her she thought it was the guy, but when she turned around she saw her B.F.F.- Tatiana and her boyfriend- Michael on their new motorcycle and then they waved to her, Naomi waved back. She started to calm down, but once when she turned a grabbed het from her side and pulled her onto the motorcycle and then Tatiana and Michael cheered them on and then they both drove off... And since Naomi was wearing a dress she felt uncomfortable and started screaming.
Then the guy said," Hang on tight...", then they went faster and she screamed louder, then he rolled his eyes. Two minutes later they stopped in front of Target and then Naomi tried to run, but then he grabbed her arm and put her over his shoulder once when they got in front of the store he put her down and held onto her hand, very lightly. When they walked inside he grabbed a red dress, black eye shadow, scissors, black boots, and red lipstick, then they paid for it and he pushed her into the girls' bathroom.
He asked, "Can you change please...because you look like you're going to a cemetery or something?" then Naomi asked,"B-But who you?...", then he sweetly said, "My name's Jake Lopez I go to Beverly Hills High and I have a little sister named Vannessa, two older brothers, and I lice with my Father, I hope I get to see you again...", but before he left Naomi grabbed his arm and asked, "What about your mother?", then Jake said very sadly, "I-I-I don't know, my older brothers and a dad won't tell me..." then Naomi asked, "Who are your brothers?" then Jake blankly said, "My oldest brother's name is Daniel and my brother who's four years older than me and 6 years younger than Daniel, which is my brother Johnathan he's 20." then Naomi said, "Thank you, for saving me and buying this dress." before Jake could say anything Naomi kissed him...(10 or more seconds) then they both blushed and Jake said," I-I'm sorry but I've got to home...I call my maid to drop you home....bye..." and he rushed out of the store but tripped over a hobo and then Naomi chased after him and gave her phone number:x9x-x1x-xx1x then he gave her his, he called the maid and then he drove off....
Naomi started running..she passed Mc Donald's, your house, my house, etc...then she came to a dead end at an abandoned school and she was surrounded, then the youngest walked up tp Naomi and said,"Now you know that you shouldn't be out at night and should just stay home with your mommy....",then Naomi slapped his face and spit on him and then he said,"Big mistake..." they were about to attack her, but then they heard a loud rumbling noise... They looked behind them and saw a 16 year old boy with wavy black hair covering up 1 eye, he wore a ripped up shirt and torn jeans and Jordan's...he was riding his motorcycle then at top speed, then the 2 oldest guys ran toward him while the others stayed near Naomi...
When the 2 guys their bats and pipes at the black haired guy, he dodged it, flipped himself and the motorcycle in the air then, he grasped 2 knives and threw it at 1 guys leg and arm, the other guy tried to run away but then the black haired guy chuckled then he threw rope at the guys feet and made him fall and then he landed in front of the other 4 guys and Naomi.Then he started to step off his motor cycle and 3 guys ran away, while the youngest who was 13 stayed behind..shaking. Then the guy stepped in front of him and whispered," I know who you are and your mom's coming for you..." the boy was about to say the guy's name, when all of a sudden his mom pulled him by the ear and threw him into the car and drive off. Naomi thought the guy was cool..only for a second and while he was laughing Naomi made a run for it...when he finally turned around Naomi was gone...
Then when he heard a dog barking on his left, he turned and saw Naomi running toward Target, then he got his motorcycle and left. Then Naomi stopped running in front of KFC when she heard a motorcycle behind her she thought it was the guy, but when she turned around she saw her B.F.F.- Tatiana and her boyfriend- Michael on their new motorcycle and then they waved to her, Naomi waved back. She started to calm down, but once when she turned a grabbed het from her side and pulled her onto the motorcycle and then Tatiana and Michael cheered them on and then they both drove off... And since Naomi was wearing a dress she felt uncomfortable and started screaming.
Then the guy said," Hang on tight...", then they went faster and she screamed louder, then he rolled his eyes. Two minutes later they stopped in front of Target and then Naomi tried to run, but then he grabbed her arm and put her over his shoulder once when they got in front of the store he put her down and held onto her hand, very lightly. When they walked inside he grabbed a red dress, black eye shadow, scissors, black boots, and red lipstick, then they paid for it and he pushed her into the girls' bathroom.
He asked, "Can you change please...because you look like you're going to a cemetery or something?" then Naomi asked,"B-But who you?...", then he sweetly said, "My name's Jake Lopez I go to Beverly Hills High and I have a little sister named Vannessa, two older brothers, and I lice with my Father, I hope I get to see you again...", but before he left Naomi grabbed his arm and asked, "What about your mother?", then Jake said very sadly, "I-I-I don't know, my older brothers and a dad won't tell me..." then Naomi asked, "Who are your brothers?" then Jake blankly said, "My oldest brother's name is Daniel and my brother who's four years older than me and 6 years younger than Daniel, which is my brother Johnathan he's 20." then Naomi said, "Thank you, for saving me and buying this dress." before Jake could say anything Naomi kissed him...(10 or more seconds) then they both blushed and Jake said," I-I'm sorry but I've got to home...I call my maid to drop you home....bye..." and he rushed out of the store but tripped over a hobo and then Naomi chased after him and gave her phone number:x9x-x1x-xx1x then he gave her his, he called the maid and then he drove off....
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