For the Love of Rain: Chapter 2 - Finding Out
This is the chapter where Rain finds out the truth about Damien.
Ok, so on the first chapter, no one commented. I really wish someone would to let me know what I did right or wrong. But in other news: I've been writing out my story before I type it and I'm starting to run out of ideas. I REALLY need some advice so if someone gives me a good idea and at least four good characters, I'll willingly use them. Thanxies loves!
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Rain's POV
I wen through the boxes of stuff that my dad left behind when he moved out a year ago and found some old black sweats and a gray shirt. I ran upstairs and knocked ob the bathroom door.
"Come in!"
I opened the door and stepped inside. I looked over and saw his wet, naked body through the steam and the frosted glass of the shower doors. Speechless, I just stood there in awe, staring as the hot water ran over his body. My heart began to pound loudly in my ears.
"Anyone there?" The guy asked.
"Oh! Um...Here are some clothes. When you're done, come to my room so I can give you something for that cut. It's the one your left.
"Thanks." He said again.
"Hey, if you don't mind me asking, what's your name?" I asked, trying and failing to look away from him.
"Damien...Yours?"
"I'm uh...R-Rain." I stuttered as he turned in my direction lathering shampoo into his hair.
"Rain? Nice name."
"Thanks."
"So, tell me about yourself, Rain."
"Uh...You're in the shower...naked."
"Oh, it's fine. I don't mind." He replied chuckling at my bashfulness.
"Ok. Well what do you want to know?"
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Damien's POV
I looked out the big French doors at the rain. The sun was just rising, causing the lake to glisten silver in its dim light. I opened the door and breathed in the smells of the morning.
"DO IT!!" A voice screamed in my head. My back began to ache furiously.
"Damien?" Rain asked sleepily behind me. "You ok?"
"Yeah. I just-" Then, I jumped.
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I know this chapter is kind of short but I just thought that this would be a good place to stop. Y'know to build t little suspense. But don't worry. I promise not to take to long to post the third chapter. It should be up around Monday. No promises though.
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Rain's POV
I wen through the boxes of stuff that my dad left behind when he moved out a year ago and found some old black sweats and a gray shirt. I ran upstairs and knocked ob the bathroom door.
"Come in!"
I opened the door and stepped inside. I looked over and saw his wet, naked body through the steam and the frosted glass of the shower doors. Speechless, I just stood there in awe, staring as the hot water ran over his body. My heart began to pound loudly in my ears.
"Anyone there?" The guy asked.
"Oh! Um...Here are some clothes. When you're done, come to my room so I can give you something for that cut. It's the one your left.
"Thanks." He said again.
"Hey, if you don't mind me asking, what's your name?" I asked, trying and failing to look away from him.
"Damien...Yours?"
"I'm uh...R-Rain." I stuttered as he turned in my direction lathering shampoo into his hair.
"Rain? Nice name."
"Thanks."
"So, tell me about yourself, Rain."
"Uh...You're in the shower...naked."
"Oh, it's fine. I don't mind." He replied chuckling at my bashfulness.
"Ok. Well what do you want to know?"
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Damien's POV
I looked out the big French doors at the rain. The sun was just rising, causing the lake to glisten silver in its dim light. I opened the door and breathed in the smells of the morning.
"DO IT!!" A voice screamed in my head. My back began to ache furiously.
"Damien?" Rain asked sleepily behind me. "You ok?"
"Yeah. I just-" Then, I jumped.
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I know this chapter is kind of short but I just thought that this would be a good place to stop. Y'know to build t little suspense. But don't worry. I promise not to take to long to post the third chapter. It should be up around Monday. No promises though.
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