First Love Chapter 9
Emma had moved into a new town and a new school where she meets and falls in love with Jack who loves her back. ;) The title explains it all. Hope you like it :D. Have fun and comments are greatly appreciated. ^.^ Ty to all those who reads my story.
Emma’s POV
It was a bright and sunny Monday mornings, Emma was thinking about Jack when she walked down the halls towards her locker, a little smile on her lips. Emma saw Andy waiting for her next to her locker with a big smile on her face. "Hey, Emma," Andy called out.
"Hey," Emma smiled at her.
"So… are you going to tell me or not?" Andy asked as Emma was opening her locker to take out her books for class.
"I had a lot of fun at the park with h…err.. them," Emma replied, blushing.
Andy must have seen the dreamy look on Emma’s face when she asked, "so when are you going to tell Jack you like him?" she smiled.
"No I’m not going to say anything to Jack," Andy said after she saw Emma’s panicked expression, "don’t worry."
Emma relaxed, "I… I’ll tell him…" Like never, Emma thought. As if Jack, a popular, good looking guy would like me… Emma sighed. The bell rang and the kids all rushed to class. Andy smiled, "I think Jack likes you too," and before Emma can say anything else she rushed off to class.
Emma’s class room was near her locker so she wasn’t in a hurry. All the girls here wants to go out with Jack… Emma felt her stomach drop down to her knees, Jack… with another girl… Emma thought about it for the rest of the period.
The bell for second period rang. "Hey Emma," said a deep familiar voice. She turned around and saw Jack’s smile.
"Oh hey, what’s wrong," Jack asked in a concerned voice, as he studied Emma’s face.
Emma tried to smile, "nothing…" the second bell rang, "take your seats everyone," the teacher said.
Emma walked into the classroom and sat at her desk and Jack took his seat, which was a couple of desks behind Emma’s. She was trying to concentrate on the teacher but she felt Jack staring at her and she was too nervous to turn around.
The class ended and Emma gathered up her books, should I say something to him? What if he only likes me as a friend? Emma looked up and realized Jack was gone. She walked out the door. "Emma." Jack said, he was waiting for her beside the door. "Are you ok, you looked a little green earlier?"
"Yeah I’m ok, was feeling a little sick today because I didn’t eat breakfast," Emma was thankful Jack didn’t say anything else as they walked towards the cafeteria.
They saw Andy sitting at the table with some of Jack’s soccer buddies. When she saw Emma and Jack, she waved them over and the guys made room for them. The guys were all talking about soccer training and the other teams they’re playing next week. Emma wasn’t concentrating on the their conversation so she was surprised when someone said her name.
Emma looked up from her lunch to see everyone staring at her. Oh my gosh… Emma felt her face heating up rapidly. "Uhhhhh…" Emma looked at Andy for help.
"Yeah Emma, we should go play a little soccer game with them after school, it’ll be fun," Andy smiled.
"Oh, ummm I, uhhh…" They’re all staring at me… Emma thought, feeling nervous.
"Yeah," Jack smiled at her, his blue eyes twinkling, "come."
"I…mmm okay," Emma said softly.
They went back to talking and Emma went back to day dreaming about Jack, sneaking glances at him and looking away embarrassed when he caught her. He’s so nice, and he makes me laugh… if only he would go out with someone like me.
The lunch bell rang and everyone was getting ready to leave and go to their next classes. Jack turned to her, " I’ll see you after school, Emma," Jack smiled. His dimples are really cute…
Brrrrrrrrrinnnnnggg!!! The last bell of the day. Emma went to her locker and saw Andy waiting for her, "hey, you seem distracted at PE today?" Emma opened her locker. "I’m fine," she smiled at Andy. They walked towards the soccer field, Andy still looked a little worried but she didn’t say anything else. There were a bunch of guys with a soccer ball there.
"Yo, Andy! want to play a game with us?" A boy with jet black hair, yelled.
"Sure I’ll be right there!" Andy shouted, "Emma, you come too"
"I uhh don’t… I’m not good at sports," Emma said blushing a little.
"Don’t worry, you can be on my team," Emma turned around and saw Jack standing there smiling.
There were extra people so some of them had to sit out and sub. It was so much fun and Emma was having a great time, she’d almost scored a goal. When it was her time to sit out she felt happy and relaxed, when she was playing she didn’t think about anything but kicking the ball. Emma took a long drink of her water bottle
"Hey, you’re Emma right?"
Emma was so startled that she sputtered into her drink. She looked up and saw the guy with the jet black hair, his eyes were emerald green he smiled, wow he looks gorgeous. Emma began to feel really embarrassed about being startled and felt her face heating up.
"Uhhhh I… yeah… I’m Emma."
"I’m Brandon," he smiled, sitting down next to Emma.
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I’ve been looking back at the polls on chap. 7 and I think that there is a higher percentage of people voting for POV’s to go, because they probably thought that chap. 8 wasn’t that good. Well I’m not sure what to do now.
I want to explain about chapter 8. A lot of people has been commenting that I’ve repeated chapter 7 onto chapter 8. Well I don’t feel as if I had because, yes there are some scenes that are almost identical to chapter 7 because they are both together( Jack and Emma). I cant just make up a different scene and change their POV’s, the same event is happening to them both, and I think that’s why people are saying that I’ve repeated the story.
I’m really confused as to what I should write, right now. I don’t know when chapter 10 is coming out, I need to sort this out. And I’m really sorry about the new character Brandon, I said that I would intro a new guy and I did, but he’s at the end of this chapter… I thought that the next chapter would be on Jack and how he would feel seeing them together… but this POV thing had got to be resolved.
I really want to finish this story but… *sigh*
Ok, well thanks for everyone that’s commented and you guys are amazing =) This was chapter 9 and I hope you’ve all enjoyed it.
It was a bright and sunny Monday mornings, Emma was thinking about Jack when she walked down the halls towards her locker, a little smile on her lips. Emma saw Andy waiting for her next to her locker with a big smile on her face. "Hey, Emma," Andy called out.
"Hey," Emma smiled at her.
"So… are you going to tell me or not?" Andy asked as Emma was opening her locker to take out her books for class.
"I had a lot of fun at the park with h…err.. them," Emma replied, blushing.
Andy must have seen the dreamy look on Emma’s face when she asked, "so when are you going to tell Jack you like him?" she smiled.
"No I’m not going to say anything to Jack," Andy said after she saw Emma’s panicked expression, "don’t worry."
Emma relaxed, "I… I’ll tell him…" Like never, Emma thought. As if Jack, a popular, good looking guy would like me… Emma sighed. The bell rang and the kids all rushed to class. Andy smiled, "I think Jack likes you too," and before Emma can say anything else she rushed off to class.
Emma’s class room was near her locker so she wasn’t in a hurry. All the girls here wants to go out with Jack… Emma felt her stomach drop down to her knees, Jack… with another girl… Emma thought about it for the rest of the period.
The bell for second period rang. "Hey Emma," said a deep familiar voice. She turned around and saw Jack’s smile.
"Oh hey, what’s wrong," Jack asked in a concerned voice, as he studied Emma’s face.
Emma tried to smile, "nothing…" the second bell rang, "take your seats everyone," the teacher said.
Emma walked into the classroom and sat at her desk and Jack took his seat, which was a couple of desks behind Emma’s. She was trying to concentrate on the teacher but she felt Jack staring at her and she was too nervous to turn around.
The class ended and Emma gathered up her books, should I say something to him? What if he only likes me as a friend? Emma looked up and realized Jack was gone. She walked out the door. "Emma." Jack said, he was waiting for her beside the door. "Are you ok, you looked a little green earlier?"
"Yeah I’m ok, was feeling a little sick today because I didn’t eat breakfast," Emma was thankful Jack didn’t say anything else as they walked towards the cafeteria.
They saw Andy sitting at the table with some of Jack’s soccer buddies. When she saw Emma and Jack, she waved them over and the guys made room for them. The guys were all talking about soccer training and the other teams they’re playing next week. Emma wasn’t concentrating on the their conversation so she was surprised when someone said her name.
Emma looked up from her lunch to see everyone staring at her. Oh my gosh… Emma felt her face heating up rapidly. "Uhhhhh…" Emma looked at Andy for help.
"Yeah Emma, we should go play a little soccer game with them after school, it’ll be fun," Andy smiled.
"Oh, ummm I, uhhh…" They’re all staring at me… Emma thought, feeling nervous.
"Yeah," Jack smiled at her, his blue eyes twinkling, "come."
"I…mmm okay," Emma said softly.
They went back to talking and Emma went back to day dreaming about Jack, sneaking glances at him and looking away embarrassed when he caught her. He’s so nice, and he makes me laugh… if only he would go out with someone like me.
The lunch bell rang and everyone was getting ready to leave and go to their next classes. Jack turned to her, " I’ll see you after school, Emma," Jack smiled. His dimples are really cute…
Brrrrrrrrrinnnnnggg!!! The last bell of the day. Emma went to her locker and saw Andy waiting for her, "hey, you seem distracted at PE today?" Emma opened her locker. "I’m fine," she smiled at Andy. They walked towards the soccer field, Andy still looked a little worried but she didn’t say anything else. There were a bunch of guys with a soccer ball there.
"Yo, Andy! want to play a game with us?" A boy with jet black hair, yelled.
"Sure I’ll be right there!" Andy shouted, "Emma, you come too"
"I uhh don’t… I’m not good at sports," Emma said blushing a little.
"Don’t worry, you can be on my team," Emma turned around and saw Jack standing there smiling.
There were extra people so some of them had to sit out and sub. It was so much fun and Emma was having a great time, she’d almost scored a goal. When it was her time to sit out she felt happy and relaxed, when she was playing she didn’t think about anything but kicking the ball. Emma took a long drink of her water bottle
"Hey, you’re Emma right?"
Emma was so startled that she sputtered into her drink. She looked up and saw the guy with the jet black hair, his eyes were emerald green he smiled, wow he looks gorgeous. Emma began to feel really embarrassed about being startled and felt her face heating up.
"Uhhhh I… yeah… I’m Emma."
"I’m Brandon," he smiled, sitting down next to Emma.
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I’ve been looking back at the polls on chap. 7 and I think that there is a higher percentage of people voting for POV’s to go, because they probably thought that chap. 8 wasn’t that good. Well I’m not sure what to do now.
I want to explain about chapter 8. A lot of people has been commenting that I’ve repeated chapter 7 onto chapter 8. Well I don’t feel as if I had because, yes there are some scenes that are almost identical to chapter 7 because they are both together( Jack and Emma). I cant just make up a different scene and change their POV’s, the same event is happening to them both, and I think that’s why people are saying that I’ve repeated the story.
I’m really confused as to what I should write, right now. I don’t know when chapter 10 is coming out, I need to sort this out. And I’m really sorry about the new character Brandon, I said that I would intro a new guy and I did, but he’s at the end of this chapter… I thought that the next chapter would be on Jack and how he would feel seeing them together… but this POV thing had got to be resolved.
I really want to finish this story but… *sigh*
Ok, well thanks for everyone that’s commented and you guys are amazing =) This was chapter 9 and I hope you’ve all enjoyed it.
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