First Love Chapter 7
Emma had moved into a new town and a new school where she meets and falls in love with Jack who loves her back. ;) The title explains it all. Hope you like it :D Have fun and comments are greatly appreciated. Sorry to keep you waiting well here it is, have fun! Remember to vote.
Jack’s POV
"Jacky when are we gonna see the puppy?" Maddie asked excitedly. They were walking towards Emma’s house.
The sun was shinning and the cool breeze made the day perfect for outdoor activities. Jack’s mom had packed enough sandwiches, drinks, fruits and snacks to feed an army.
"Maddie, we’re almost there," Jack smiled at her.
Maddie was happily chatting away when she noticed some wildflowers waving side to side in the gentle breeze. She stopped and went over to the pick the beautiful blue and white flowers.
"Here Jacky," Maddie handed the flowers to her brother. Jack looked at the flowers, confused and Maddie sighed, seeing the expression on Jack’s face.
"Those are for Emma, Jacky," she shook her head as if to say, "what would you do without me?" Jack grinned at Maddie and shrugged.
"Do you think she’ll like them?"
"Jacky…" she sighed again, "of course she’ll like them!"
Jack turned his head away to hide the smile on his face. His little sister was eight years old going on thirty. Even though they are eight years apart they love each other and Jack is very protective of his little sister. When Maddie was first brought home, Jack knew that he would always love her. His first thought was that she was very tiny and had decided that she needed him as a big brother to protect her.
Maddie was tugging Jack’s hand, " hurry Jacky."
Jack chuckled, "Maddie, slow down."
They saw Emma’s house and Jack waited behind Maddie after she ranged the doorbell. Emma opened the door, Jack notice the warm smile she gave Maddie and felt some of the tension leave his body, thinking for a millisecond that she wouldn’t like his little sister. While his sister and Emma were talking, Jack felt his feelings for Emma growing. Emma was wearing a pair of shorts and a green tank top that made her green eyes look beautiful, her chestnut hair was wavy and curled around her oval shaped face. Emma wasn’t wearing her glasses and Jack thought that she looks better with them but Emma still looks beautiful either way.
Emma and Jack’s eyes met and Emma began to blush, she’s so cute he thought. Jack gave Emma a big smile and she smiled back. Jack felt Maddie tugging at his shirt tail and saw her look pointly at the flowers.
"Oh!" Jack remembered the flowers. "Err… these are for you," Jack gave Emma the flowers.
Emma blushed and gave Jack a big smile, "no one’s ever given me flowers before…they’re so beautiful, thanks." Emma told them that she was going to find a vase to put them in and went inside the house.
Jack felt so happy that he was the first one to give Emma flowers… "ahemmm!" Jack looked at his little sister. Maddie had a smug smile on her face. "Told ya."
"Yeah, thanks Maddie." Jack grinned and tussled Maddie’s hair.
Emma come back out with Max and they walked towards the park. Jack had stayed behind watching the two chatting, well… mostly Maddie was the one talking but they seemed happy and Emma was amused and seemed to enjoy Maddie’s endless jabbering.
Jack saw Emma’s eyes twinkling with laughter and felt pleased that they got along well with each other and Max was yipping happily from all the attention he was getting from Maddie.
Maddie looked over her shoulders at Jack, "hurry up Jacky, your so slow!"
"Hey!" Jack pretended to look hurt, "these bags are heavy!"
Emma and Maddie both giggled. "Jacky’s so strong, right Jacky?" Then Maddie turns to whisper loudly to Emma, "and he needs the extra exercise, his belly is getting big from all the cookies he’s been eating yesterday."
"Hey! I heard that!" Jack pretended to scowl at Maddie, making her giggle and Emma laughing at the both of them. Jack saw Emma laughing, her eyes twinkling and thought to himself, she’s so pretty when she laughs.
When they arrived at the park Jack found a shady spot under the tree and he began to set up the picnic. They took turns playing fetch with Max and then they all played some Frisbee when Max became tired and took a nap.
When it was time for lunch, Maddie asked Emma about her school and friends she had before she moved here while they ate their lunch. "Well I had a best friend named Maureena." Emma smiled at Maddie, "who’s your best friend?"
While Maddie was chatting about her best friend, Jack noticed how Emma had turned the topic from her to Maddie. When they finished lunch they played with the soccer ball Jack brought along. Jack was playing against Maddie while Emma sat under the shade with Max. When he had the ball Maddie tackled him and started ticking him.
"Ahhhh stop stop!" Jack said in between laughs. Then Maddie got up and started kicking the ball towards the makeshift net they had set up. "AND SHE SHOOTS AND SHE SCORESS!!!!!" Maddie shouted.
"Hey! You cheated!" Jack accused, he was trying not to laugh at the innocent face she was giving him.
"I can’t help it if you’re ticklish," Maddie gave Jack a sweet angelic smile. Jack couldn’t hold in his laughter anymore. Then Maddie joined and laughed with him. Jack saw Emma smiling at them and he gave her a big grin.
"Who wants ice cream?" Jack asked. Maddie was waving her hand like crazy, " me! me! me! Ohhhh! I dooo! I want some!"
Jack chuckled, "ok what flavor?"
"Chocolate!"
Jack smiled at Emma, "how about you?"
"Oh umm i can pay for myself, thanks" Emma smiled.
"No, let me pay for you, please?" Jack saw Emma blushed and he smiled, thinking that he’d buy her all the ice cream in the world to see her happy.
"Ok, strawberry please."
Jack bought two chocolate and one strawberry ice cream, they ate it while walking home. Maddie was holding on to Max’s leash and had walked ahead of Jack and Emma.
"Ummm Jack?" Emma said softly.
"Yeah?" Jack looked over at her.
"I.. I … had a umm a lot of fun today," she said the last part in a rush.
Jack felt really happy and he smiled at Emma, "yeah me too." Jack felt his heart skip a beat when she smiled back at him.
They walked Emma home and at the door she waved then went inside with Max, Jack had wanted to kiss her but Maddie was there. Jack and Maddie walked towards home, "I know who Jacky likes," Maddie said in a singsong voice, Jack just smiled. It was a great day, Jack felt that he had fell deeper in love with Emma.
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Guys so sorry it took so long, well exams were over a week ago and i was lazy... yeah I'm mad at me too, sorry! Well here's chapter 7, tell me what you think, oh yea and suggestions are always welcome, I'm trying to squeeze in some of the suggestions from the earlier comments and I'll put them in on the future chapter, don't think i have forgotten cuz i haven't and don't feel bad if i haven't used yours its not that i think it stinks its just that i might think that it doesn't fit into this story, wow this thing is getting long lol was gonna keep it short n simple... oh well i hope you all had fun reading this chapter and I'll try to get chapter 8 out asap. Oh yea check out the poll its IMPORTANT
happy readings everyone
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IMPORTANT:
Ok guys I've been reading your messages and this one person said that the POV's were annoying, I'm not sure who took off the message but I've read it and it concerned me, because I want write a good story and I want your opinion on this so i put up a poll concerning POV. My next chapter is going to be based on the result of this poll so vote while you can.
I'm going to check out the polls on the 8th and during the time of these days till the 8th i will think of ideas for chapter 8 and would proba-- ok I'm being honest here I don't know when chapter 8 is coming out I don't want to promise you guys something and break it so I'm not sure when it would be out but I can promise that will finish it asap. Thanks for being so patient.
*NOTE* POV means Point Of Views
"Jacky when are we gonna see the puppy?" Maddie asked excitedly. They were walking towards Emma’s house.
The sun was shinning and the cool breeze made the day perfect for outdoor activities. Jack’s mom had packed enough sandwiches, drinks, fruits and snacks to feed an army.
"Maddie, we’re almost there," Jack smiled at her.
Maddie was happily chatting away when she noticed some wildflowers waving side to side in the gentle breeze. She stopped and went over to the pick the beautiful blue and white flowers.
"Here Jacky," Maddie handed the flowers to her brother. Jack looked at the flowers, confused and Maddie sighed, seeing the expression on Jack’s face.
"Those are for Emma, Jacky," she shook her head as if to say, "what would you do without me?" Jack grinned at Maddie and shrugged.
"Do you think she’ll like them?"
"Jacky…" she sighed again, "of course she’ll like them!"
Jack turned his head away to hide the smile on his face. His little sister was eight years old going on thirty. Even though they are eight years apart they love each other and Jack is very protective of his little sister. When Maddie was first brought home, Jack knew that he would always love her. His first thought was that she was very tiny and had decided that she needed him as a big brother to protect her.
Maddie was tugging Jack’s hand, " hurry Jacky."
Jack chuckled, "Maddie, slow down."
They saw Emma’s house and Jack waited behind Maddie after she ranged the doorbell. Emma opened the door, Jack notice the warm smile she gave Maddie and felt some of the tension leave his body, thinking for a millisecond that she wouldn’t like his little sister. While his sister and Emma were talking, Jack felt his feelings for Emma growing. Emma was wearing a pair of shorts and a green tank top that made her green eyes look beautiful, her chestnut hair was wavy and curled around her oval shaped face. Emma wasn’t wearing her glasses and Jack thought that she looks better with them but Emma still looks beautiful either way.
Emma and Jack’s eyes met and Emma began to blush, she’s so cute he thought. Jack gave Emma a big smile and she smiled back. Jack felt Maddie tugging at his shirt tail and saw her look pointly at the flowers.
"Oh!" Jack remembered the flowers. "Err… these are for you," Jack gave Emma the flowers.
Emma blushed and gave Jack a big smile, "no one’s ever given me flowers before…they’re so beautiful, thanks." Emma told them that she was going to find a vase to put them in and went inside the house.
Jack felt so happy that he was the first one to give Emma flowers… "ahemmm!" Jack looked at his little sister. Maddie had a smug smile on her face. "Told ya."
"Yeah, thanks Maddie." Jack grinned and tussled Maddie’s hair.
Emma come back out with Max and they walked towards the park. Jack had stayed behind watching the two chatting, well… mostly Maddie was the one talking but they seemed happy and Emma was amused and seemed to enjoy Maddie’s endless jabbering.
Jack saw Emma’s eyes twinkling with laughter and felt pleased that they got along well with each other and Max was yipping happily from all the attention he was getting from Maddie.
Maddie looked over her shoulders at Jack, "hurry up Jacky, your so slow!"
"Hey!" Jack pretended to look hurt, "these bags are heavy!"
Emma and Maddie both giggled. "Jacky’s so strong, right Jacky?" Then Maddie turns to whisper loudly to Emma, "and he needs the extra exercise, his belly is getting big from all the cookies he’s been eating yesterday."
"Hey! I heard that!" Jack pretended to scowl at Maddie, making her giggle and Emma laughing at the both of them. Jack saw Emma laughing, her eyes twinkling and thought to himself, she’s so pretty when she laughs.
When they arrived at the park Jack found a shady spot under the tree and he began to set up the picnic. They took turns playing fetch with Max and then they all played some Frisbee when Max became tired and took a nap.
When it was time for lunch, Maddie asked Emma about her school and friends she had before she moved here while they ate their lunch. "Well I had a best friend named Maureena." Emma smiled at Maddie, "who’s your best friend?"
While Maddie was chatting about her best friend, Jack noticed how Emma had turned the topic from her to Maddie. When they finished lunch they played with the soccer ball Jack brought along. Jack was playing against Maddie while Emma sat under the shade with Max. When he had the ball Maddie tackled him and started ticking him.
"Ahhhh stop stop!" Jack said in between laughs. Then Maddie got up and started kicking the ball towards the makeshift net they had set up. "AND SHE SHOOTS AND SHE SCORESS!!!!!" Maddie shouted.
"Hey! You cheated!" Jack accused, he was trying not to laugh at the innocent face she was giving him.
"I can’t help it if you’re ticklish," Maddie gave Jack a sweet angelic smile. Jack couldn’t hold in his laughter anymore. Then Maddie joined and laughed with him. Jack saw Emma smiling at them and he gave her a big grin.
"Who wants ice cream?" Jack asked. Maddie was waving her hand like crazy, " me! me! me! Ohhhh! I dooo! I want some!"
Jack chuckled, "ok what flavor?"
"Chocolate!"
Jack smiled at Emma, "how about you?"
"Oh umm i can pay for myself, thanks" Emma smiled.
"No, let me pay for you, please?" Jack saw Emma blushed and he smiled, thinking that he’d buy her all the ice cream in the world to see her happy.
"Ok, strawberry please."
Jack bought two chocolate and one strawberry ice cream, they ate it while walking home. Maddie was holding on to Max’s leash and had walked ahead of Jack and Emma.
"Ummm Jack?" Emma said softly.
"Yeah?" Jack looked over at her.
"I.. I … had a umm a lot of fun today," she said the last part in a rush.
Jack felt really happy and he smiled at Emma, "yeah me too." Jack felt his heart skip a beat when she smiled back at him.
They walked Emma home and at the door she waved then went inside with Max, Jack had wanted to kiss her but Maddie was there. Jack and Maddie walked towards home, "I know who Jacky likes," Maddie said in a singsong voice, Jack just smiled. It was a great day, Jack felt that he had fell deeper in love with Emma.
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Guys so sorry it took so long, well exams were over a week ago and i was lazy... yeah I'm mad at me too, sorry! Well here's chapter 7, tell me what you think, oh yea and suggestions are always welcome, I'm trying to squeeze in some of the suggestions from the earlier comments and I'll put them in on the future chapter, don't think i have forgotten cuz i haven't and don't feel bad if i haven't used yours its not that i think it stinks its just that i might think that it doesn't fit into this story, wow this thing is getting long lol was gonna keep it short n simple... oh well i hope you all had fun reading this chapter and I'll try to get chapter 8 out asap. Oh yea check out the poll its IMPORTANT
happy readings everyone
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IMPORTANT:
Ok guys I've been reading your messages and this one person said that the POV's were annoying, I'm not sure who took off the message but I've read it and it concerned me, because I want write a good story and I want your opinion on this so i put up a poll concerning POV. My next chapter is going to be based on the result of this poll so vote while you can.
I'm going to check out the polls on the 8th and during the time of these days till the 8th i will think of ideas for chapter 8 and would proba-- ok I'm being honest here I don't know when chapter 8 is coming out I don't want to promise you guys something and break it so I'm not sure when it would be out but I can promise that will finish it asap. Thanks for being so patient.
*NOTE* POV means Point Of Views
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