First Impressions Description

This is the first story I've written on here. I have written a lot of this out but I need to type it and put it on here. I know what I want to happen in it it's just a matter of writing it down. The story's about a girl who moves here sophomore year and finds good friends and possibly a great guy. Things happen and she wonders if she can do it allot if she has to move back to where she came from.

Please comment and tell me if this would be a good story to start! (: Thanks.