Feelings of a First True Love

A short, little poem I wrote late at night. I kinda like it but it's a little cheesy? I don't really know. Comments please..
I know this love is true,
I have connected all the clues.
I can see it in you eyes,
You don't want our love to die.

For I don't want it to end
Even if I may have to bend,
I would do anything for you, for us
And in you, I do truly trust.

It's just something we can't explain.
We never fight, not even complain.
I guess you could compare us to white doves,
Or maybe just say were in love?
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Published: 7/16/2009
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