Far Away, Come Closer

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What an avoidant personality you have.
Blind me with your gorgeous words.
Here to stay?
Time will tell.
You're arms length away from me, but you feel so far.
Incoherently you speak.
The words you force are simply grotesque.
Quite funny isn't it?
One minute we are sailing through the oceans of freedom,
The next, we are locked away in separate cells.
How have we grown so far apart?
It's true, we have.
It's purely indisputable.
Mere thoughts will no longer keep me warm at night.
I am repelled by your invisible stench,
Your cold heart, and your cold body.
These stories I reap are wondrous really.
It's time my tale has been told.
   By Shianne Campbell
Published: 2/16/2008
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