Falling - 1 (Continued)

I accidentally submitted my last article before it was finished. Here is the rest of it. Hope you like it
As he looked down at his paper he knew it. This girl will get him what he wants. Ray was no ordinary boyfriend. He was wanted in the seelie and unseelie couts alike. This is why the queen of the unseelie court had sent him on a mission to collect ray, at any cost. But he, Cameron, was of the seelie court. The two queens traded their best knights as a truce. Now his new queen sends him on tasks that no other knight has ever accomplished, trying to prove him inefficient so she can break the truce. But Cameron has completed every task his queen has sent him to do. But he was sure that as soon as he got the information from this girl, rays girlfriend, he could go home and prove his new queen wrong once again.
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This is the ending to falling-1. Do you like it any better now and would you read more.
Yes
No
Maybe
Absolutely
Not really
Psyced, cant wait to see whats next
It was horrible
Uninteresting
Not my kind of story
Its ok
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Published: 9/27/2010
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