Falling from Heights
I was looking through all the poems I ever wrote and guess what I found! I found my FIRST POEM!! (: I really like it and I hope you like it as well!! Please comment! I wanna know if you think I was good back then or if I've improved a BUNCH!! (:
Can you catch me?
I'm crying and falling from heights,
Can you catch me?
My hair is streaming behind me,
Can you catch me?
Everything is a blur of motion,
Can you catch me?
Never ceasing, I fall,
Can you catch me?
Whether or not to my doom, I fall,
Can you catch me?
Suddenly, everything is slowing,
Is something going to catch me?
Suddenly someone with angel eyes appear,
Catch me?
You open your arms and...
You caught me.
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Please tell me what you think! Do you think I was good back then? Or do you think I'm a much better poet now? Please give me your honest opinion! (:
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Fallen angel quote from bible:
"And war broke out in heaven: Michael and his angels battled with the dragon, and the dragon and its angels battled but it did not prevail, neither was a place found for them any longer in heaven. So down the great dragon was hurled, the original serpent, the one called Devil and Satan, who is misleading the entire inhabited earth; he was hurled down to the earth, and his angels were hurled down with him." - Revelation 12:7-9.
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