Ever After Friendship

A poem my friend (An author here on Buzzle, Ali Stoddard, Read her stuff!! She's freaking awesome) wrote. She thinks that it sucks and that it needs to be fixed by me! Yeah right, like I'm gonna go and ruin a perfect poem... So, you, readers, are gonna tell me if I should.
Beauty stronger than the eye can see
Beauty stronger than I will ever be.

A contagious laugh marked with a smile
Memories meant to last a while.

A single ray of sun on a cloudy day
You can chase all our worries away.

Yet in the blink of an eye I can lose you
Is our friendship forever true?

Every heart beats to a silent rhythm
Still yours is outlined in golden trim.

All our memories seem to come together
Making me believe we will be here till the ever after.

~*♥*~

This poem is completely my friend's (Ali Stoddard)!! But she thinks that I should give it an ending. I think it's amazing right now. You tell me if I should! =)
Should I give it another ending?
No!! It's perfect the way it is and your friend is an amazing poet!! :D
Nah, It's good. =)
Eh... It could do with a bit more... It's not exactly... good... =P
Yes!! The poem is awesome but you should put something that is Yours into the poem. After all, it's about ur friendship!
Yes, It needs a bit more. It's good... just it needs more. (:
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Published: 8/17/2011
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