Eternal Thirst: Fallen Society

When the war begins, and society slowly falls apart, how will they fix things? When the two people, causing worldly deaths, and mayhem, basically disappear from the face of the earth, how do they find them? And when the forever un-quenched thirst for blood takes over, revealing them, could this be the end of all Vampires? A story of Love. Death. War. Resurrection and Loss. The many things eternally endured by the immortal.
SURPRISE EVERYONE!

Christine- THX!
Anqiee- Thank you so much! I'm sorry for keeping you waiting,but I finally got it out, and up
Felicia-Thank you.. here it is
ASiAN CUTiE- Yes, here's the sequel, lol... sorry it's been like forever
Luv It- Thx!
Memori- well, thx, and.... HERE THE SEQUEL
A- sry for leaving you hanging, but I just HAD to, it would make you want the sequel more.. muah hahaha

SinCyn- AAAHHHHH!! Thanks! Lol, I did my best to make start this story off right, especially because I left everyone hanging, and didn't post until late. THE SEQUEL HAS ARRIVED!

AlexisGrace- I wonder if your guess was right??? Lol, sry for the computer class thing, lol I always get into trouble for reading Buzzle stories during class time, but by dammit its worth it
SerenityRain- THANKS BUNCHES!!!!!!!, I understand, I could hardly decide between Chaos and Shadow
Kim- here you go.. and thanks
Shayla- awww, thanks
Christy-OMB(bob)! Thank you, I try to do my best.
Ashez- YESS JAYNE IS BACK!!!!!!!.. I cnt wait to see who wins either... lol
Kim14-I really thought about the publishing thing, it's a good idea, but Idk, I kind of don't like my family reading my stories. Not that their horrible and judgmental, but, I like for people I don't know to read it, and if it's published, the world will know...THX BTW

Cassandra-THANKS!
Ashez again- sry, I'm back!
Lol X- Thx
KATRA NIGHT- YES THERE'S MORE! Lol thank you
Macey- I'm sorry for leaving you hanging. But I wanted to get a GOOD start on my other story. And now that I have... BACK TO ET

TO ALL READERS AND...stuff
------I posted an "IMPORTANT NOTICE!" article about 3x.... and Buzzle didn't post not one of them, it had everything that needed to be known about the new sequel to ET. But it doesn't matter anymore, here is... hope you like it. PLEASE LIKE IT! Lol
Muah! Lubb u readers
~Bry!~

Chapter 1:

Emylee's SOS

For the first time, since my death, I could feel my heart beat. As I watched Jayne's weak and dead like body, clumsily descending the stairs, my heart rate sped up.
"J- Jayne?" Shadow whispered.

Her head snapped in his direction. I had never seen such anger and evil on Jayne's face, than at this moment.
"SHADOW!" her voice growled. Low and deep, I didn't quite understand what had happened to her. Her eyes weren't her eyes. They were black, and swollen. She was skinny, and her bones were broken.

What happened to the Jayne we had a few days ago? I wondered.
"I'm so, hungry" she cried out.
"I'll get you something" Shadow ran in the kitchen, and came back in less than a second, with a tall wine glass of blood for her.

She devoured every drop, licking the cup when she finished.
"MORE!" she demanded. The same demonic voice rang from her lungs, and I could honestly admit that I was afraid.

Shadow followed orders.
He gave her the glass, and watched as she devoured it again.

For one split second, he turned his back to speak to us, but I couldn't hear what he was saying. I watched as Jayne's face contorted and her teeth elongated. A sly smile crept upon her face, and she opened her mouth wide.

Backing away from shadow, she crawled up the wall, and got in stance, ready to attack her brother.

"JANYE NO!!!" I screamed
"AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" her voice rang, shaking the entire house.

I leaped into the air.
"SHADOW WATCH OUT!!" I ran to Jayne, and gripped her around the neck, violently slamming her into the wall. Hearing her already cracked bones, break even more.

"LET ME GO!!!!" she growled
"JAYNE! I know this isn't really you... but so help me God, I will snap your neck, right here, right now, if you ever try to hurt him again"

"Emylee...oh Emylee, Emylee, Emylee you're not a killer. You could never hurt me... NOW GET OFF!"

Jayne ran past me, straight to the kitchen, and I followed
"Jayne, come back to us... Please" Shadow begged

"LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!!!" she screeched
"I- I'm so hungry, Shadow, p- please just, let me..."
Shadow, walked over to her, in a trance like state. Staring at her wide eyed, staring deep into her soul.

"Shadow, what are you doing?"
"I have to help her, she- she's hungry, she needs me"

"SHADOW!"
"Emylee, just... let me help her"

"GET AWAY FROM HIM!" My loud and now deep voice rang throughout the house, shaking it, and everything inside of it. I grabbed a knife from the kitchen drawer.

"SHADOW WATCH OUT!" I yelled again,

I ran over to Jayne, yanking her by the neck once more. Slamming her into the wall, and penetrating her with the knife.
"EMY NO!" shadow yelled to me begging. But the job was done.
"YOU BITCH!!!" her shriek of agony pierced through my ears as I watched blood spew from her lungs.

"I had to, this isn't you Jayne, I'm sorry"
"I'LL KILL YOU!" she growled
"Come on Jayne, come back to us, come back to us please"

Jayne grabbed onto her stab wound. She began choking as the cold black fluid ran from them. The glob that came from her was alive. It was as if it was breathing, having a pulse of its own.

"Wh- what is that?" shadow asked
"It's the thing that was inside, controlling her every thought and move" I said wiping the knife.

Jayne fell to the floor, crouched in fetal position. Choking, and throwing up the remains of demonic being inside her.

"I- I don't understand, you killed her, she came back to us, AND YOU KILLED HER!!!"

"Shadow... Jayne... she- she was dead. Don't you understand. She wasn't alive, how could she just be alive all of a sudden, don't you see that it doesn't make sense?" Chaos said

"But look at her, SHE'S ALIVE NOW!!!"
"Yes, but look at her. When the dead resurrects, its because a lost soul uses their body to resurface the earth. Someone is taking over her." Chaos said

Shadow said nothing, he simply stayed quiet, staring blankly into Jayne's face as she lay, dying once more on the ground. Swarmed and surrounded by her own blood, and the black liquid covering the entire space around her. She choked. Spitting out disgusting Bile.

We all watched her leave us all over again as she fainted, back into the blackness.
"So... that was just some- some thing... that wasn't her...My sister's gone?"

He asked on the verge of tears.
"Shadow... I'm- I'm so sorry"
"NO DAMNIT! SHE HAS TO COME BACK! SHE JUST HAS TOO! SOMEBODY DO SOMETHING PLEASE!"
Him and Ser knelt down next to her, while shadow tried to revive her

"JAYNE....JAYNE!.. JAYNE! WAKE UP!"
"COME ON JAYNE! PLEASE! FOR ME? FOR SHADOW! FOR ALL OF US, JUST COME BACK!" Ser shook her, begging and begging, but I think we all knew that was never gonna happen.
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Shadow's SOS

Just like that, I had her, and now, she's gone... again...just like that. For the first time in two years, my heart pumped, rapidly when I watched Jayne limp damn near lifelessly down the stairs. But that wasn't MY Jayne. Not the Jayne I've always loved. It just wasn't her.

But if I could've had that fallen soul, over the actual her, I would've taken it, because regardless it was still a part of her... and that's all I hoped for.

"Shadow... I'm so sorry"
"Don't be Ser"
"But, Jayne, she- she's gone. I really miss her Shad... I miss her so much!" Serenity sobbed into my lap as she lay across it. I stroked her hair, trying me best to calm her.

I had always been so protective of her. When we were younger, she used to get picked on, one day she came into the house crying and carrying on.

"JAYNE!" she yelled busting through our door. Her small 6 year old frame.
I laughed at her squeaky voice, but Jayne automatically knew what was wrong.

"What's wrong Ser?"

"That boy, he- he hit me" she cried
"WHO?"
"The boy who plays with Shadow all the time!" she continued crying on Jayne's shoulder.
"What boy?" I asked
"I don't know him, but he called me stupid and ugly, then he pushed me down, and got mud all over these shoes that my daddy brought me"

Me being the asshole of an 8 year old I was, I just laughed.
But before I knew it, Jayne was trudging outside.
"RAIN!" she screamed
"yeah Jay Jay?"

With all of her might, she pushed him, and he fell directly into the mud that Ser fell in.
"I HATE YOU! STUPID!" he screamed
I saw Ser stick her tongue out at him from the corner of my eye, and that really ticked him off, so this time, he got up, and smacked her. The sound of his hard smack rang through the air. And I felt the anger in me rise instantly.

"RAIN!" I was ticked off this time, I ran up to him, grabbed him by the collar, and punched him square in the mouth.

"Sh- SHADOW! You're supposed to be my best friend!" he said astounded
"Listen, boys should never hit girls RAIN, so leave her alone! I sware if you ever hurt her again, I'll do worse than that!"

"I HATE ALL OF YOU!" he screamed and ran away.

Serenity ran up to me, hugging me, and crying on my shoulder
"Wh- why is h-he so m-mean to m-me, I n-never was m-mean to h-him...never ever ever!"

"Don't cry Ser, Rain won't mess with you anymore"

As I had a flashback of the entire event, Rain walked up to me, breaking me out of it.
"Still thinking about that ONE time you beat me up huh?"
"Yeah, and you deserved it"
"Well, as long as you know I'd never hurt her now"
"You better not, because I'll kick your ass again!"

"Yeah, that'll be the day!"
"DUDE! Have you forgotten who my girlfriend is?"
"WHOOO HOO EMYLEE! Big whoop, I'm not afraid of WHOOOOAAAA!!!!!!!!!" before rain could finish his sentence, the flowers in the table next to him burst into flames

"You're not afraid of whom?" Emy asked coming into the room.
"Uuuhh... Shad... Yeah Shad... that's who I was talking about"

"Yeah, I thought so!"
"Shadow, uh, me and shade just finished cleaning the kitchen, I cleaned Jayne, and she's back I her room, on the bed." She added

"I think it's time for me to finally let her go Emy"
"Wh- What?"
"Yeah, I can't live like this, my sisters dead body, laying in her bed. It's time for me to finally just... move on"

"Are you sure about that Shadow?"
"Yes... I'm sure"

"Okay, then come on"
Emylee grabbed my hand, and led me up the stairs to Jayne's room. We stood silently. I couldn't help but stare into her beautiful green eyes as she prepared to open Jayne's bedroom door.

"I can't believe this" she whispered.
"Me either... but Emy, it's definitely time" I sighed

"Yeah, it really is"

"HUUUUUUUUUUUUUH!"
"What was that?"

"HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHH!"
"I- I don't know"

"Sounds like someone is coughing. With an extremely dry throat. It sounds like, it sound like.. Jayne..."
~Jayne....?~
~I think it is Shadow~

I quickly flew through the door. And there it was, as we had guessed, Jayne sitting on her bed, coughing, and gasping for air, breathing smoke from her dry lungs.
~JAYNE?~

"Sh- Shadow" her dry voice called to me.
"Jayne.... JAYNE!"
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Published: 3/31/2011
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