Emma - Chapter 1

Hey there people! I'm a new author to buzzle, and love writing so I decided to write a story. I would love! Love feedback, just not rude comments please. I don't think I'm thy good at writing but I try so comments would be lovly. Ok the story hope you like it! And again feedback helps xoxo Meagan
**Hannahs POV**
"Hannah? Hannah? Helllo anyone in there?" my best friend Elizabeth says waving her hands in front of my face
"Huh" I look over at my beautiful best friend,with her long wavy blond hair, flawless tan skin, And deep crystal blue eye. She's the type of girl every girl envy's and every guy wants.
"Did you have one of those black out things you vampires have when you have a vision thingy?" she says a little to loudly
"Shhh!" I say putting my hands over her mouth looking around the buss making sure no one heard her. She's loud. California girl loud.
"Yes,and could you talk quieter please. The last thing I need is a bunch of screaming girls and guys freaking out because a vampire is on the bus"
"Oh please! It's not like you're going to suck their blood or anything" I don't answer I just clench my jaw and look away

As you can obviously tell, I'm vampire. Not one of those vampires Hollywood producers make you think are real. No, I'm a stone cold, vampire. In do drink human blood. But in my world your only aloud one human a year. That's all we really need. But stupid me already had my human. That was three months ago. It's now September. And also the first day of my senior year.

Elizabeth knows every detail about me and my world. Except for the fact that she will be a vampire herself. I have yet to inform her on that tiny fact.
"Oh my freaking god! Would you look at that hunk!" Elizabeth says as we step off the bus heading towards school.

I look in the way she pointed and gasp. NIKO HARPHAM!? What is he doing here! The prince of the vampire world is standing 100 feet away from me. Oh I just wanna run my hands threw his sexy black hair and loo- whoa Emma knock it off. I mentally kicked myself. He's rude obnoxious jerk. He thinks just because he's the prince that every girl wants him. Well he's not that wrong. But I don't!. I don't,at least that's what I tried to make myself believe

I pull Elizabeth's arm walking towards are locker.
"Hey wait-ouxh that hurt stop em!"
I turn around and give her a frown "sorry Eli"
"Jeez what's wrong."
I sigh and tell her everything about that "hunk"
When I'm done, she freaked out as we walk to homeroom "no way! Omygosh I'm totally Gonna get my hands in him"
I stop and she turns around "what?"
I whisper "he's a vampire Liz"

"Oh,well then you take a shot at him then! You need some action on your life....if you know what I mean"
I just roll my eyes and walk into the classroom to be stops dead in my tracks. Oh crap. No no no, why this classroom why?!
"Ohhhh look it's the hunk,hey wait thy means he will be in every class with us right? Or did they change it?"
I mumble "no they didn't change it" and go sit down to start my senior year.

Ok well there you go:) it seems short to me. But it's your guys input. Comment! If I don't any I'll still keep going.Oh and I just realized I put the "new author" one to out soooo sorry :/ didn't mean to.
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Published: 6/22/2010
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