Emily's Smile

Okay, I wrote this about probably the most important person in the world to me. I could go on to describe her, but she would sound just like your best friend, and I've written another poem about her on Buzzle as well. She will never see her beauty, nor her perfections, but that won't stop me from seeing them. Love you twin!
Friend among many she wears trust
Suits of armor never to rust..

Hatred, dispute, she knows the feeling
Though the feelings never form into schemes..

Her thoughts are kind when one is not
All past rivalries have no need to be fought..

Her majesty as bright as the rising sun
Holding everyone together, a fantasy undone..

Pure to the holy pleasure of distinct happiness
Nevermore anxiety to compress..

For she brightens up each and every furthermore day
With her smile, which will never fade away..
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(Short I know, I am planning on writing a longer version soon! Don't tell my friend that though, I want to surprise her... She is so busy writing on her new story 'Bound to you', she won't see this for a while. Her story is really good, go check it out!)
Do you think I should add on to make a longer version?
Well duh, the poem sucks but it will still mean something to your friend.
Hell Yeah!! Write on!
It's an okay poem, stop before you screw it up any more.
Great poem, but I like it just the way it is.
Nah, great message just your writing sucks, try different words.
Uhm.... you want me to say yes right?
It would mean so much to your friend if you wrote the longer version.
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Published: 8/6/2011
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